Reviews for DAWNING
Soncnica chapter 1 . 12/12/2009


Game over?

hahaah, good one!

John and so sweet! :)


LivingForTv chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
You captured that challenge excellently! Sam's dreamy thoughts are GREAT and I liked "game over" very much. And it's all there in 100 words!
CiZiwejes chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
It's great to see what smell you associated John Winchester with and to have Sam registering them as his dad really worked some wonders. Good job! *gives you cookies*
UpstairsMind chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
33 No words for how awesome this is.
Mad Server chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
That was fantastic! Really gripping, and awesomely disorienting, and then the Dad-smells... good one!
DeansBabyBird chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Very Nice hunny. Bev x
LaylaBinx chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Aww this was so sweet! Its always nice to read a caring father fic .- Most of the time John is portrayed as being such a jerk but this was really sweet! Great job honey! .
IheartSam7 chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Oh that was just so pretty. :)
bhoney chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
I liked the smells Sam associated with his dad. Nice moment at the end.
Visionairy chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
I liked it! "Relax, Sam." Dag grabbed hold. Wonderful!
TraSan chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Very, very nice!

I really liked this one. *sigh*

I do so love the brothers being brothers.

sammygirl1963 chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Fantastic drabble Karen. Now you have me wondering just what happened to Sammy to get him such a bad shape. At least John is there with him and taking care of him! Thank you for the wonderful b'day drabble.
Tribble Master chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
/game over?/

good use of pov! i LOVE it! WRITE ON!
rsb57 chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
wow. I run out of words to describe how your stories make me feel. This is so cool.

Familiar scents make the hairs in my nose twitch and I find my hand unclenching as well. I love these guys through your eyes.

Just perfect.

Micaiah chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Great drabble. Love those last three lines.
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