|Reviews for Vacation|
| I'm Nova chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
...careful, Jack. As the Doctor says, time can be rewritten. Actually, why aren't you rewriting it instead of playing in the shower? ...Ok, there is the chance of the Time Cleaners or whatever they are called popping up. Still, you have a brain. Figure something out!
...And now I'm stopping raving. Do I really need to say I love this or is it self-evident? ...Yeah, I know. Better not leave anything unsaid. So yeah, I love it. It broke my heart just a bit, too. But it's really - wonderful.
| VRetrope chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
Touche. It took me a long time to realize this Jack had gone back in time. Well done.
| CeilingNinja chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
Aw, very sad.
| LiquidLash chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
I read this thinking 'His right cheek? Wasn't that where...?' but dismissed the thought.
Then the ending brought it all back and I nearly cried. I definitely gasped, I'll give you that. Really nicely done, keep up the good work!
| Galadriel1010 chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Oh! Oh that is wonderful! Such an unexpected twist but it adds so much. Absolutely wonderfully brilliant!
| CosmicalMadison chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Oh... I came so close to crying at the end of this. Great mix of cute and angst. Love it.
| enigma-kar chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Aww, I loved it. Great combination of angst and humour. Nice work, also loved how you wrote both Jack and Ianto. Thanks for the lovely read,
| doctor-who-fangirl chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
That. . .
that broke my heart. Poor Captain.
| ForeverBossy26 chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
I love reading moments like this, very good, Thanks for sharing it with us : )
| WickedWitchoftheSE chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
aw...heartbreaking! I love it though!