Reviews for Misdirected Love
pennypigeon chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
mega cute!
Lingo10 chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
soo beautiful and sweet.
The Only Love For Soujiro Seta chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
lol, that was cute. I love the explianation Naruto said about replaceing Sasuke with Itachi, because he couldn't bare to lose him. nice story
j7nX chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
It was very good and you've written it amazingly well. I liked the descibtion of Naruto's feelings and then his encounter with Sasuke. It was sad, sweet and funny :) You've done a wonderful job with this piece :)
traditionprincess chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Well written and an amazing story line!
durkheim chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
this was good
eeaagoh chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Really liked the beginning of this and how you described everything, I really felt Naruto's pain and rejection. Though I liked the second half of it, it really felt off because one second they're crying and the next they were being really playful. Still enjoyed this though! I really liked the ending to it

Found a typo that took me away from the mood because it made me laugh.

“Too sudden... Just a second ago you were rejecting me because you love /me/ brother!”

Reminded me of this show where the character would mess up his grammar whenever he was frustrated.

Naruto felt dizzy as /Sasuke's/ deepened the kiss...

Don't think it needs the " 's' ".

Sorry if this looks more like a beta note than a review!