Reviews for The Last Night
Guest chapter 2 . 8/7/2011
Mmmm mmmm mmmmmm Efward blindfolded...fingers roaming...sounds like heaven!
OcSickGirl chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Sexward is born!
Julia-S77 chapter 4 . 6/23/2011
Loved this outtake of their night together before the wedding xx
Julia-S77 chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
I am so happy you have written this. First chapter is great xx
VanessaWolfe724 chapter 4 . 4/7/2011
Every time I read this I love it just as much as I did the first time! You capture them so well.
1853kaz chapter 4 . 2/23/2011
Dressing each other was just the cap on a great interlude. So beautiful. Thanks for sharing so much of your romantic soul with us! Cheers :)
4ringcircus chapter 3 . 2/9/2011
Ahh, young love.
sarahlouise80 chapter 4 . 1/23/2011
awesome loved it.
deliriousLover chapter 4 . 10/12/2010
loved it :)

so cute and intimate ...xx

please update soon
Lori94 chapter 4 . 9/12/2010
Love it! Sooooo hot without being full intercourse!
GLee68 chapter 4 . 9/10/2010
so sweet... lots of UST and just as much aaaaaahhhhhh...

They are such a hawt couple when they get their act together, and yet stick to the "principles" they set.

well done, sensitive and yet gripping writing.

(think I might need to take a cold shower)

Deb (FFA)
Reader chapter 2 . 8/28/2010
Are you going to write about what Edward was going through during Bella's tranformantion (human to vampire) and when she first opens her eyes, their first night together as vampires ect. I would love to know what is going through Edward's mind.
Dil9 chapter 4 . 8/25/2010
I read your story prelude and this was lovely:) Thanks for writing! I'm reading Polar night now and waiting for the next chapter from you.
Edward'sDJ chapter 4 . 8/20/2010
Very intense and real, as well as being lovely. Thank you.
Edward'sDJ chapter 3 . 8/20/2010
I love that they're finally having this conversation. I think the fact that Edward has brought up their time apart will really help clear the air.
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