Gorgeous and fun story with just a small bit of squikies.
All the characters were heaps of fun, Jasper was defs my fave.
Thank you for writing for us.

I love Jasper.

Omg awwwwwww I love this story it's fucking adorable:3 and the whole Jonathan thing added a great touch to the store even tho it was creepy and that he deserves to rot in hell! I just love the ending it was hella cute and I love it it's not like anything I've read before and I enjoyed it so much, it'll be cool if you wrote a sequel about their married life and family, I think that would be adorable and really funny :3 :3

Amazing i loved it

Fantastic story! ! !

Kinda confusing:/

I loved every word of this story. The whole Jonathan thing was creeptastic, and wrong and horrifying, but despite the creeptastic, wrong, horrifying events that befell Bella before meeting Edward, they got through it. Terrific story. I love it. Thank you for sharing your talent. :-)

*erotinaughty* best new word. I'm contacting websters on your behalf. Then planning a parade in your honor.

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Thanks!

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"It'll be a very, very long time before you, me, and vomit are funny again."

Insert Snoopy happy dance here

I leaned over and stuck my thumb in his eggs.
Haaaahajahaaaa

Toothbrush is a test of love, in the beginning... -O

Thank you!