Reviews for Monster Puberty
Pegasister60 chapter 8 . 5/21
This story was perfect!
Pegasister60 chapter 7 . 5/21
Wait... So, no one told Zak he's not a virgin anymore?
Pegasister60 chapter 1 . 5/21
Quick question, who would actually give the talk the best? My mom never gave me it, when my puberty started, and just told me where everything was in the bathroom and I had already seen what happened to her once a month. Another less weird question, how long can Zak hide this?
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 2 . 7/17/2012
Huh! This isn't horrible! The characters were relatively in character at the beginning, but became less so later on. There were also some word mistakes and punctuation errors. It's a good plot, though, and I'm interested in reading more! :) Just keep an eye on those things I pointed out!
Luke chapter 8 . 9/13/2011
Awesome story. Not to a nag in what not. Do you think you could put pictures of this on DeviantART please? Like, Zak transforming, him as a Naga, the secret scientists naked, Zak naked, and Zak strapped to the medical bed.
Luke206 chapter 8 . 9/13/2010
That was a great story, hope you make a story of Zak changing again.
the bird of the chapel chapter 7 . 4/9/2010
L0L okay finding the 'cure' felt so random. How nice all things needed happen to be around!
the bird of the chapel chapter 6 . 4/9/2010
okay, he's not acting.

WAY too disturbing.
the bird of the chapel chapter 5 . 4/9/2010
...I bet Zak is acting.
the bird of the chapel chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Lol "Evil Puberty" is the best chapter title I ever came across with XD
Dylexa chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
This is very well written. Nice vocab! I really enjoyed reading the first chapter!
randomperson99 chapter 8 . 11/9/2009
Perfect way to end this story! Bravo my friend, bravo!
Amber Pegasus chapter 8 . 11/9/2009
I loved it. I give this story two thumbs up!
NinjaSheik chapter 8 . 11/8/2009
Cool~!
Logan the Awesome chapter 8 . 11/8/2009
NO! The end? I loved this story. Keep writing. Your good.
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