|Reviews for Two Red Roses Across The Moon|
| tromana chapter 11 . 9/17/2009
This is as addictive and insightful as ever. I can see why you warned for weirdness, though...
| AgentGlory chapter 10 . 9/17/2009
check that out!
is not a virus, just A mentalist vid, Bosco, Jane, Lisbon and Minelli...
| PhoenixWytch chapter 11 . 9/17/2009
Oh Jane... He's an extremely lucky man to have Lisbon.
Thanks for writing.
| mwalter1 chapter 11 . 9/17/2009
“No.” She takes his face between her hands. “You're going to be a better person than that, if I have to drag you there kicking and screaming.”
Great to look into Jane's background. Would love to see a shirtless Jane on the show.
| desa1985 chapter 11 . 9/17/2009
Thanks for another great chapter!You just made my day!
| Arcadya chapter 11 . 9/17/2009
I am always amused by your starting captions... especially today's. 'weird-fest, but Jane takes off his shirt' - an open call if I every saw one :)
Glossolalia, chickens, blood, two mafia guys, stupid other cops... too perfect. Oh and I meant stupid as in I hate them, not that they're dense... although...
Giggle, Van Pelt knows that Jane's abilities are all observation and extrapolation and showmanship and she still makes comments about black magic? He didn't really sacrifice the chicken to the voodoo queen. Did he? ;)
This was a great mix of crazy/hurt. And Lisbon struggling with it. Fantastic.
| thiefofjoy chapter 10 . 9/16/2009
"First rule of Fight Club..." - Ha! I'm eating this story up.
| desa1985 chapter 10 . 9/16/2009
Bosco is a jackass!but i love what you're doing with him interacting with Lisbon and Jane. And seriously!didn't he notice the chemistry between Lisbon and Jane!
I need the next chapter!
This is my favourite mentalist fic ever!you're awesome!
| music-and-fairytales chapter 10 . 9/16/2009
GR! STAY AWAY FROM HER BOSCO! *shakes fist* He's such a creep. I hate him. But can I just say, I laughed out loud at the 'first rule of fight club - never mess with morhter teresa's babies' line. Just got home from the insanest day at work and this really brightened it up for me. Thanks so much! Loving it. Can't wait to see more xx
| chocolatefan chapter 10 . 9/15/2009
Loved this chapter! Please continue
| KaleidoscopeEyes13 chapter 10 . 9/15/2009
I officaily hate Sam Bosco. Just thought I'd let you know! Great chapter!
| Habeous Corpus chapter 10 . 9/15/2009
hah! love the conversation at the end. nd "neurotic Charlton" is right!
| Arcadya chapter 10 . 9/15/2009
Oh yeah, more insights into the Bosco.
Intriguing to say the least.
I loved the quiet Lisbon-Jane moment in her office, you managed to pull in every little thing that encapsulates their relationship.
Loved the phone flashback.
I can actually understand Bosco, which is good, that you didn't just go all 'evil marysue' on me, not that I expected it, but you know...
He just doesn't quite realize that Lisbon's moved on, has he? I know he's a smart guy, but he's not very smart, is he? It would be a bit obvious that Lisbon regrets what happened between them...
Oh well, I know the interesting is about to have a landslide. I waited in anticipation.
| Lisa15 chapter 10 . 9/15/2009
I'm really enjoying the progress of this story - your characterisation of Lisbon and Jane is really good, even through their developing relationship, and I really like the way you are portraying Bosco. I can't wait to read how the story continues!
| erica83ca chapter 10 . 9/15/2009
Because I love the quirky sarcastic sense of humor Lisbon has and Jane seems to share/appreciate this is my favourite line:
"Her mouth curves, and he remembers that strange sense of humour he never quite understood."
I do have to admit that this one still has me silently giggling. Mainly because I keep picturing Jane in her office getting ready to lift his leg:
“At least he hasn't tried peeing in the corner of my office yet.”
Amazing as always!