Bosco really is a jerk. Sure - I feel his concern...NOT! Looking forward to Jane and Lisbon's dinner date. Loved the phone call from her brother!

Yes! Jane and Lisbon are just the greatest. :does a happy dance: I love, love, love the way you wrote Jane and Lisbon shooting down The Idiot AKA Bosco. Hopefully The Idiot doesn't do something to really piss off the team, Minelli, Jane and Lisbon. Especially Lisbon since I think she would put aside her scruples about shooting a colleague.

Thanks for writing.

I've been enjoying this series very much. The characterization is spot on as always and the progression has felt very natural. I doubt the show will take this route, but one can only hope :)

that made a good laugh

loved the two original agents :)

great description of the jane lisbon relationship :)

keep it up

Hm, really like your characterization of Bosco, which does not mean I like the man. Interesting personality - seems to me he's still stuck in his own self-deceptions from years past, while Jane is (slowly, incrementally, painfully) starting to grow out of his.

Love the bit with the stressball. In real TV, Lisbon would never throw staplers at Jane...but crumpled paper, or a stress ball, oh yeah.

Whatarepeoplelike, repeating gossip like that to superior officers?

Mr Bosco, I fear, is not one we can or should dismiss. I just hope he'll come to his senses at some point and let things be...

Oh, that was so lovely, warm and beautiful. The perfect 'next step' to their relationship. I wish the AnJLverse is a real place, there's hope for the two of them.

Sean is awesome! You write backstory and original characters like it's nobody's business. Come to think of it, you write everything like it's nobody's business. I had such a stupid smile on my face when I finished reading. Awesome! Okay, I'm done gushing like an idiot.

If I *had* to pick a favourite part...

Quote:

“So...no making out on your desk?”

“No.”

“My couch after hours?”

“No.”

“Meh. You're no fun, woman.” He grins. “We could stall an elevator?”

This is absolutely beautiful. Loving it. You're an amazing writer and this is a wonderful story. I can't wait to see more of it. Update soon? x

Damn that brother of hers! And yet how nice indeed it was to see them both from someone else's point of view, and to have them each other that way, too. Plus a lovely kiss at the end, too.

Also good to see that even when he's not showing off and being a 'psychic', he remains an interesting, entertaining character.

Obligatory quoting of bit I liked (hope it works this time):

"He's hanging about at the doorway like some damn teenager, because he's afraid he'll get dumped with a 'just friends' speech. Which is ridiculous. She cares about him, he's important to her, he knows that she finds him attractive...he realizes that he is reciting a list of things to himself, and winces."

Hahaha! That made me crack up.

LOL Sean just became my favourite person ever!

Amazing - I love when she realized he was trying to make a good impression - so sweet.

Am I completely insane or was there an empire records reference in there?

I'm enjoying Jane and Lisbon warming up to happiness. Nicely done.

so cute! and yet not run of the mill fluff, some substance behind it. I really liked Sean. And Jane is a boyfriend again :) This idea just makes me smile. Can't wait for an update.

Oh that was a sweet kiss. Too bad the brother didn't leave in a cab instead of Jane...

i heart Sean! the last part was really hilarious. YAY for jisbon, and for awesome stories like this.

*squeel* Oh my gosh this was the best chapter ever! I loved the ending!