|Reviews for Dear Mello|
| Unleashed creativity5821 chapter 1 . 4/9
I LOVED IT! Especially at the end, when Matt decided to state those stupid, obvious facts. That makes good writing.
| mxmsupporter chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
As much as I don't like mpregs ("WHY, WHY, DAMMIT! WHY MELLO HAS TO BE A FUCKING WOMAN? HE HAS A FUCKING DICK AND BESIDES, YOU CAN'T GET PREGNANT THROUGH AN ASSHOLE!" ;) ), this was a very sweet story. A hilarious one, too. Damn, it was hard not to laugh out like a freak xD
" Hmm, not as good as that chocolate lube you get," he dead-panned, ignoring the fact that the doctor was rushing off with a bloody nose." this scene was great! XDD
What to say, really. The only thing that bothered me was the lack of explanation as to why Mello got pregnant in the first place. Ah, mpregs with their weird world... ;)
| featherwing25 chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
Awwwww, that was really sweet. I wonder who Heath takes after.
| xDelfin chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
Holy motherfuxking shit, I normally stay away from mpregs but HOLY EFF this was fantastic! Beautifully written! Pace, characterization, the whole she-bang! Awesome! :D
| smosh234234 chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
LOLOLOLOL is all i can say about this story :)
| Presto-Deleto chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
i love it! it was hilarious. XD i love this couple even more.
| untrackable chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
*Goes to bathroom and pukes up rainbows, sparkles, and unicorns*
hack! READING THIS WAS WORTH IT!
| BI-CHAN11 chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Awwew cute! I named their child in my fics. Melly Anna L Jeevas!.(a girl)But this was cute!
| chibiekaneko-nyan chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
. i like when mello get pregnent .
. and i love this story . XD
| 23Asura32 chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
this is probably one of the funniest things i have read in a long time but now i kind of want to know what the others would be like pregnant especially L and Near since they are kind of apathetic. i liked your writing style a lot as it was easy to understand and you got the characters personalities pretty accurate so nice job!
| 494dwangel chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
this is epicly sick...i love it ... i am usually not much of a mpreg fan but this is hilarious
| XxMatt.MelloxX chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
Mello is a guy... how did he.. Uhhhhh...
| killing u with umbrellas chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
| x-HoneyBunny-x chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
That was soo adorable *squeals* !
i love the part when Near patted them on the head XD
| MyBeatingKokoro chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Hell yeah! I love Death Note. Cute story line. Can you write a Dear Near?