Reviews for Metro
DragonGirl323 chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
So I really really liked this story. Well written Paine/Baralai's are so hard to come by these days, being an avid writer of that pairing myself, and it's refreshing to read one whenever they come along.

I find myself wishing there was more to this story, though. It would certainly be interesting to read much more if you ever decided to continue.

But anyways, bravo on wonderful fic! :]


DarkenedPetals chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Aww that was immense! So original i love it!

i especially like the random ramblings when she gets side tracked cos it's how your thoughts are.. Brilliant
Rei chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
Sorry, but I can't see 'lai listening to hip hop :/