Reviews for New Beginning
Delilah chapter 3 . 7/18/2014
Omg this was the best story I've ever read it showed u the true power of love
Ciela16Northman chapter 3 . 6/14/2014
OMG that made me cry! Best story ever!
jensenkent chapter 3 . 5/30/2014
sad and all but the end is very toughing all the same though and makes it wreath it in the end
insomniareader chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
Ok first off, Beggining is incorrect spelling; it's Beginning. Second, you may want to look into getting another Beta reader, because this was rife with errors; grammatically and structurally. This is a fabulous plot and I would have enjoyed it, if not for the problems. I hope you continue writing because with some work, you will be fantastic.
CheyTeaD chapter 3 . 8/20/2012
I loved it! I cried at the end not sure more out of sadness or happiness but i loved it either way!
beth626 chapter 3 . 8/16/2012
Awe...i started tearing up there in the sweet
Damon's wify chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
i love this story
Tynee23 chapter 3 . 6/18/2012
Just found this story and really enjoyed it. Thanks
cheesytan93 chapter 3 . 5/9/2012
Good one
Jensen's Petunia chapter 3 . 4/16/2012
Okay, so I should be in bed sleeping so that I can go to work in a few hours but I for some reason can't sleep and while I should be getting other stuff done with this time I can't seem to stop reading fanfiction. Especially anything McDanno (Hawaii Five-0), anything ErSoo (True-Blood) and anything GoSoo such as this.

Which was an excellent story by the way. I loved reading it. Never did like Bill with Sookie. Always wanted Sookie with Eric and then when Godric was introduced in the flesh finally would switch back and forth between her with Eric and her with Godric and this one was just awesome.

And you're right, the happy ending was much appreciated and wanted.

Only one thing that really, REALLY irks me and please, for future readers of your wonderful work, please fix this one typo-because Sookie is NOT Bella-as it is written:

"Bella took out the dagger with a gasp as her blood split from her wound. She stood with Pam's help and ignored her horrified look. Moving fast, she used her power and threw the dagger so fast no one would have been able to dodge it. The queen let out a scream as it embedded into her chest. She died screaming in pain."

Thank you. ~JP
Meganiona chapter 3 . 3/17/2012
i don't believe i can convey to you how much your story touched me. it was beautiful. absolutely amazing. the ending made me cry so hard in bittersweet happiness. thank you for writing something so beautiful :)
Make war not love. war is fun chapter 3 . 3/7/2012
cute and sweet story
hondo64ou chapter 2 . 11/11/2011
Bill is no fun. He's the kid that tells the teacher there should be a test with five minutes until the bell rings...on a FRIDAY, the beginning of a 3 day weekend.
vampirelover2009 chapter 3 . 10/31/2011
Awwwww they loved each other so much :') thumbs up and a pat on the back :) thia was no is amazing!:)
xXxSn0wAngelxXx chapter 3 . 10/11/2011
Oh my! I'm crying! That's how toushed I am with this story!

It's simply awsome! And I love the end!

Hope to read more of your stories soon
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