Reviews for I am Sorry I was too Late Jak
anon chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
N'aww, very cute bit of bromance right there! Good job!
xxwriter389xx chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
i read this a while ago but just wanted to say i loved it so much ]
TamaliaDuckiiLilMizRaynCloud chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
ToT

it made me cry ITS SO SAD

and i really like the friendship fics of Jak and Dax

everyones so into the love fics its really weird

theres just not enough really sad fics anymore but this is one

and i loved it

keep writing!
Aimed mischief chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
Aw, that was great! _
Shadows in the Light chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
A bit unexpected. I'd beleive Daxter could think through something like this. His friendship with Jak seems to be one of the few things he's ever serious about...

In crituiquing terms however, I think that he began sounding a bit ooc towards the end, but it isn't noticeable enough to be distracting.

Do you think you can make a reverse to this, like what Jak thought of Daxter and him not helping for two years. It'd be nice to know why Jak never really seemed bitter at Daxter for not being there..
WaterLiliy chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
this was really good, sad when you think about it, but good. I think there were a few grammar mistakes in there, but otherwise i quite enjoyed it :D
yellow 14 chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
A well written piece. You need to break up that huge paragraph towards the end though. Keep writing
Lady Stars chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
I liked this. It was good from Daxter's point of view. I love Jak and Dax friendship fics!
Twisted Skys chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
That was beautiful and sad. Well done!