Reviews for That Which I Cannot Live Without
Guest chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
AliceLikeFireflies chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Loved this story. Im so sorry for you loss ;( Im just glad that that this jasper story had a happy ending, an ending that you deserved for your fiancé but unfortunately never received.
ShesGotStyle16 chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
I laughed.

And I cried.

And laughed.

And then cried more.

This story was so perfect...

and I love how you involved Emmett! Haha.

This was a beautiful. You involved a crises, a happy ending, the idea of how Jasper & Alice were made for eatchother...



Please, keep writing! Wonderful work!

P.S., I'm very sorry for the loss of your fiancee. :'(
sapphire chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
Sooooooo beautiful! I'm crying and my bro is staring! Love it! NEVER give up writing!
kuramasfan chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
aww sad and cute, loved the happy ending :)
xXMythical-Midnight-SunXx chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
Wow.. just wow, is all you can say about this story, I cried, yes, but wow it was so adorable! I loved it!

I'm really sorry fiancé, that would be awful. My close friend had Chronic Leukemia but she made it through through it.

Well, I really enjoyed your story.

anonomous chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
I think that you are simply amazing. That was possibly one of the most heart-warming, brilliant stories I've ever read. I lost a friend to Lukemia, and this proves that there CAN be a happy ending...
Touched chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Wow. Just... wow. Very rarely do i get moved by a story that I actually tear up.

I would also like to say sorry for your loss.
overzealousbunny chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
Hi there :D

Your fic was part of our Faithful Friday One Shot Reviews over on the Fornication Station [ w DOT fornicationstation DOT blogspot DOT com] .. although it was a little later being posted today instead due to technical difficulties hehe

Thanks for such an emotionally touching story and sharing it with the ffn world.

The Fornies
mischief-maker1 chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
ACK! You killed me! Gah, it was terrific! My dad died of colon cancer, so sories like this touch me. It was excellent!
aletheswan chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
God,that was beautiful..i was about to cry..if there would have been more i would have burst into have got such a beautiful way with words!i hope you keep writing!
Mysterious Soula chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
i love it
mssmith chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Oh dear, that was a very touching story. I am so sorry for your loss. Thank you for your story and for your love of Jasper.
SnowyHedwig chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
Wow. First of all, kudos to you for writing something so near and dear to your heart. That you let Jasper survive was wonderful and touching. That you shared this with us, letting us into your own experiences and grief? There are no words...

I really like the way you showed their youth, with snapshots to give insight to their relationship. Alice's feelings and emotions were vivid, and heartbreaking in her pain. When she promised Jasper, knowing that it would be the only promise she coudln't keep, it TOTALLY made me cry - tragic, heartrending, yet completely understandable.

The song was a perfect fit, definitely. Your thoughts on touch really hit home to me. My favourite bit: "Touch, such a simple act that we all take for granted, but not me, not anymore. From the moment Jasper defied all logic and walked, yes walked, out of that hospital, I made sure every time I touched someone, anyone, I make certain it counts."

You've given me something to aspire to, and I thank you for that. You've got talent, and I hpe in writing this story, it's helped you as well. Thanks for sharing, this one is definitely going into my favourites.

shit! I just wrote a huge review and it disappeared! gr...
mrsjwwhitlock chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
i think this is possibly the best story i have ever read.

i love it so much!

it was cute and sweet and im so glad it had a happy ending.
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