Reviews for Observations
Insane Liam chapter 263 . 5/23/2022
to this day, this story is still my all-time-favourite star Trek story. your ability to capture the characters and their evolutions is breathtaking. your ability to capture Spock's inner voice sent shivers down my spine in awe. I bow before your genius.
vulcan chapter 166 . 5/22/2022
i loved that part like when spock and kirk kiss and make love and this read's like the first time that they do it
vulcan chapter 165 . 5/22/2022
just read this part and can't think of what to say maybe next time
vulcan chapter 157 . 5/21/2022
why are you calling him dander when in star trek they called him decker
vulcan chapter 156 . 5/21/2022
didn't read this chapter if that's what you call it you took it from an esp of star trek
vulcan chapter 153 . 5/21/2022
why did you let chekov find and smoke cigarettes THAT WAS WRONG OF YOU
Shy chapter 262 . 11/28/2021
Holy moly, that's been a ride. Shivering, grinning, crying, afraid, depressed with all 9f them... I love that you made them work for that bond... I sometimes hated how but your story is grandiose
a trace of amber chapter 11 . 7/22/2021
Aww spock. Harsh but clear and logical ending. Imagine thinking no place exists for you at all!
kz chapter 263 . 3/2/2021
i havent read this in years but it remains my favorite star trek fiction! time for a reread!
KG chapter 263 . 8/6/2020
You still have a reader in 2020 :) Thank you for writing this masterpiece. It was a beautiful, slow burn.
a trace of amber chapter 4 . 7/13/2020
Hahaha the line about him observing the teams confidently AND uselessly actually made me snort. So true Spock that Kirk gets away with meddling and asking questions and no one wants you to!
sherryfanfic1999 chapter 263 . 6/24/2020
I really enjoyed reading Observations. So long, it is a journey in of itself. I was there with the crew by Spock's side every step of the way.
The only subject I am sad about is not knowing what happened that Spock ended up with the sex-slave traffickers. What happened before, how long was he gone?
If it wasn't for the step dad, would Winona have hated Jim? With Sam hating Jim, did something happen before step dad got to the farm?
Even with all the questions, I look forward to having another journey through space with you. Of course reading about Spock and Jim's romantic love journey that is. More hurt comfort and drama please. Such a devilish want. Thanks for sharing your extraordinary adventures with us.
bittybee119 chapter 261 . 4/15/2020
I am in shock finishing this story...I love the characters and their struggles. I have been addicted to this since I started reading it. Your work here is truly a work of art and your writing is fantastic. This is a truly original piece on how it is put together and the slow burn you have here is epic but worth every moment. The characters are so full and vibrant. I love the family within this story. I have a full on book hangover after this one. Thank you for the amazing journey.
vika832mlp chapter 263 . 3/29/2020
jesus mother fucking christ this was a hell of a ride. Thank you for giving me such and amazing experience reading this masterpiece.
p.s this is going on my #1 spot of fanfiction I read this year
Alliya Uchiwa chapter 263 . 3/14/2020
Hello !

Firt thing : sorry for the mistakes i'm sure there will be, i'm not english "

I don't know if you are still on this website but, i've juste finish this story and i had to let a review.

It was my second attend to read it.
First time, i've stop not long after New York, not because it was not good, no, but because there were still so much chapter and i have not the time to read all.

Second time was the one. More than one week to real this this fic, and... whaou. I haven't the words to explain what this do to me.

This fic is for me a masterpierce and for each chatper i was amazed by all the details ( scientist, history, diplomacy...) ans by all the emotions you gave me with your words
This story is even better than books i have read.

I've read a lot of fanfic but this one... this one is all.. realistic. I mean... i'll take for exemple the relation betweek Jim and Spock. It was all well conduct, logical, not rush.
I have laughed, i hade cried, i was angered...
Each character have his/her chapter, his/her story and it was just so... fantastic

I admit i skip a few passage because i didn't understand what they were talking about, but wahou.

And i was not ready for the... 60 last chapters ( more or less, i don't remember well the exact numbers). And the final... The final... I've cried. Yes, it wad a good ending ( i think i woould not have stand a "bad" ending ") But it was almost... bittersweet.

So, i will stop here. I don't know if you will read this, but i want to say : thank you. Thank you for giving this story to us
( but i don't konw if a could read other story without compere to this one so... for that maybe not tank you XD)
And yeah :
Live long and prosper
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