Reviews for The Van Guys Jin, Hurly & Miles
D.D. Casale chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
Argh... I can’t watch, hear or read this scene anymore without getting tears on my eyes. I keep repeating, they can’t kill Juliet, they simply can’t!

Anyway… that was very good, especially since it was your first try, right? Really good! Can’t wait to read more from you… I also rewrote that scene in the end of my story, I rewrote two times actually, from James and Juliet’s perspective. But it’s a long way until it gets there, I’m still on season three. ]

Keep writing…
KaydenceRei chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
That was wonderful Marla. It was nice to get the perspective of what was happening during the incident from everyone else.

Now we have an idea of what the rest of them could have been doing this entire time. Thank you :)