Reviews for Leap of Faith part 1
Raberba girl chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Aw, it's cool that Max II is keeping a journal now.

Wait, so Max II wrote "What Happened Next For Max II" in-universe? Huh.

"I don't really have many friends there, on acount of me being a "recombitant lifeform"." Uh...actually, it's because she goes out of her way to avoid people, even friendly ones. XD

Hey, look, Kadie! Interesting, I wonder how this'll go down.
valerie to-dad chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
Huh, this is interesting. I think I like it :). It was well written and pretty "James Patterson" in style; and there was only maybe like, one tiny little spelling mistake that I spotted. Very interesting, is there still going to be more?

By the way, I appreciate the "youth group" bit. Go Jesus! :D

-val