Reviews for In the Rain
Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2014
You're pretty good... I enjoyed the whole story and wanted more by the end. Thanks for the great read.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
So sad
Guest chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
wow... just wow. this was amazing
Darkkon27 chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
Wow. Depressing but inspirational.

I love it!
Little Gem Magnolia chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
Very nice. A little sad, a little bittersweet but nice.
reeee chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
This is a very beautiful story. That final paragraph captures the life and times of Jack so much it all clicks into place. Why it was that Jack claimed he wasn't afraid of death- the man knows the Reaper's coming, but all he'll do is chuckle and ask it, 'What took you so long?'.

This also made Metal Gear Rising much more meaningful- it shows that this time, Jack has a family to support, and he's not just going to lose an eye and an arm and die like a dog. No, he'd grab a new armor, hunt down those who did it to him, and, finally, is able to cut apart anything that stood in the way to his goal.

tobyturnerisboss chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
with her age, she is six during liquid's insurrection and 10 in mgrr
Cielshadow17 chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
I love this fic so much you did a good job with it! But ok I have to ask someone else this question? I know Sunny doesn't have a lot of experience with people so thats why she stutters but does anyone think a really big reason also is that Snake shot Olga with on too many tranquilizers? Lol I know its not a real reason but I like to imagine it is ok? Sorry had to ask someone
Kyu-Momo chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
Wow... that was beautiful! :)
Wasabi chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
The Metal gear fanfiction database is much more fulfilled because of you. Good job ,Soldier.

Lich Irelia chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Wow this is fantastic. The descriptions the introduction and end all of it flows and reads well. The only mistake i saw was when Raiden was ""Yeah, he'd done all right but how far could Sunny go with someone who knew how to handle kids, who'd had a childhood period?"" It should be the opposite didn't know how to handle kids and had no childhood. But besides that, this is one of the best things I've read on this site. It also makes me sad that no one seems to like Raiden enough to write him. Very well done i look forward to what ever else you decide to write for this fandom.
Dichotomous-Dragon chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
AWESOME. Your description is great and I absolutely love the way you characterize them both. I have no good words for how much I like this. It is very, very well done.

miikka-xx chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
Extraordinarily beautiful. Wonderfully written. The interactions between Jack and Sunny were engrossing and quite IC. You captured Jack's cynicism and nihilistic nature so much it was almost painful to read on, but you had to, to see where he would go and what would happen.

It was an amazing tale.
NiuNiu chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
Wonderful, just pure literal bliss! I was in heaven while reading the fic, devouring every single word from the beginning to the very end. There's never enough Sunny/Raiden stories, not with this great quality! Totally inspiring fic and I'm shocked to see there's only a few reviews! (I think Snotacon porn gets the most of the comments...)

You know, I just love these two so much - I even have simple tattoos of Raiden and Sunny, protecting each others. After this fic my need to love them more just grew _

HoshisamaValmor chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
this was beautiful. a little big, but it was so interesting one doesn't get bored. your writing was perfect, I really can't find much more words to praise you. Raiden's exploration of character was very very good. congrats
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