|Reviews for Of rose and vanilla|
| OnexLostxSoul chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
Ah, another masterful piece. And lighthearted in nature, at that! ;D
I was extremely impressed by the rose and vanilla motif, which functioned on multiple levels. Foremost, it served as a sweet and enchanting scent with seductive connotations. The fact that it is a scent and therefore intangible mimics Genesis' absorption with Sephiroth; a scent is enthralling whenever it is in your vicinity, but you can't grasp it. It has a teasing nature in this respect. The fact that the scent is tied to Sephiroth's hair, one of his most defining physical features, contributes to the allure.
"What are you fighting for?"
A provocative question which you answer superbly. ;) Once again, I am impressed by the taste and elegance with which you approach the matter of intimacy.
The ending line was an excellent one. The word 'fragile' was extremely well employed, give the events of Crisis Core.
A very effective piece overall.
| kysis-the-bard chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
I really, really love this story. A lot. Sephiroth/Genesis is definitely my OTP as well, and I really enjoyed how you portrayed both characters here. You captured their personalities to a t.
A touch of constructive criticism: you started a lot of sentences with a noun that needed some form of article before it, or a possessive pronoun, like the one starting with "Alabaster face...". That sentence should have been "His alabaster face" and another one, with "Crimson coat..." should have also had either his or the in front of it. It threw me out of the story a little, because you did this so often, but other than that, you grammar is pretty close to spot on and doesn't take away from the story.
I really love your work and I can't wait to dive into reading more of it!
| TheBestLaidPlans chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
Well thought out.
Amazing word choice.
| PhoenixDivine chapter 1 . 3/3/2010
"Genesis strived for perfection.
Sephiroth was perfect."
Stunning. Absolutely perfect.
I had to laugh when Gen called him "Sephy" though. That was kind of silly. :D
| angelicwarriorsaveshizumi78900 chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
I love them both so sexy, lovable, huggable and touchable. meow.
Love your children forever.- personal quote.
AION THE CUTE FAIRY KITTEN
| Archishamyn4yk chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
Вижу тебя вштырил этот факт из канона :)
Я в неописуемом восторге.
Как только большая часть эмоций спадет, перечитаю и напишу тебе нормальный отзыв.
| pearlwhite chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
Oh, sweet. You have such a good handle on these two characters - their personalities always feel 'right' and their interactions natural. And it's so nice that you've given them a little gentle breathing space. Lovely.
| sphinxofthenile chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Lovely little story, and especially a breath of fresh air after all the tragedy you have written. Poor things, they need their lighter moments too. :)
| SherrySummer chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
That was lovely. Clever Genesis. I'm beginning to enjoy this pairing, and you did a lovely job with Sephi's characterization. _
| CNome chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
Aw! This is so sweet! I like how you tied canon-FFVII into this and, as always, Genesis/Sephiroth are beautiful :D