|Reviews for Slaves to our Nature|
| etherium chapter 4 . 2/28/2012
Aww... I wish there was more...
| LadyElena17 chapter 4 . 10/21/2011
love this story so far! can't wait to read more!
| Silas Serenity chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
I love this.
Please dont stop.
| Laurie chapter 4 . 9/30/2010
Aww.. how sad that this isn't continued any further. I would have liked to read more. :)
| alc219 chapter 4 . 7/1/2010
I acrually LOVE this story so far and really hope you continue it! xx
| Niamh Cullen chapter 4 . 6/25/2010
this was really good
please update soon
i really enjoyed it!4
| Awkward Ocelot chapter 4 . 3/28/2010
the ending reminds me of a aladdin
| shaqbarcalis chapter 4 . 2/25/2010
AWESOME STORY! I hope you are going to finish it?
| SopranoandBass chapter 4 . 12/10/2009
Excellent story! You have a very talented pen, or keyboard, that is. Keep writing! I can't wait for more! What will Edward say when he knows that she is princess! What will the guards do? I need go know! Update soon!
| Born 2 B A Vampire chapter 4 . 11/8/2009
nice work, no spelling mistakes that i can see, teh plot is greate, no gramer mistakes, you might want to when you are switching perspectives overlay whats happening, when she bit into the apple write about her falings as she bit into the apple, and edwards point of view as teh stake get jamed in to his body, not to mention when bella saves his life, though from what i know about palice gaurds from every thing i read they will probably asume she stole the knecklass.
| Lynathia chapter 4 . 9/12/2009
Oh, I so loved this. Keep on writing, I'll follow. I like the way your story goes on, and oh my god, I so want that Edward. Would you send him to me?
| brandy8 chapter 4 . 9/11/2009
Loved this chapter! Especially the part where Bella "commands" that the guards let Edward go. Girl power!
| mommymac0508 chapter 4 . 9/9/2009
It is still ood keep it going
| kell74 chapter 4 . 9/8/2009
Yay Bella...you show them girl
wonder how Ed reacts now he knows who she is...cant wait till the next one
| Darkangel22192 chapter 4 . 9/8/2009
I love it! can't wait to read more! update soon!