|Reviews for Friendly Rivalry|
| Mirage chapter 7 . 5/23/2013
No no no nooooo...
why did ya stop, why did you do this? Erutis without her Krayo, Raenef IV alive again, and Raenef gone ...mor or less, and then Eclipse say he stays with him forever ...and you end the story...not fair- they both have to get together and find there own happy end...this gods are not nice that they hurt those two so much...
you really shoud write an second part to the story
| The Puppeteer Master chapter 4 . 11/13/2010
| KatzeIason69 chapter 4 . 2/15/2010
really great chap so can't wait for more.
| KatzeIason69 chapter 3 . 2/13/2010
really great story line, i so can't wait for more.
| hikaru-yamato chapter 2 . 1/14/2010
great writing style.. plus, i love the story.. the characters are all in character.. can't wait to learn more about the little krayon.. hope you update soon..
| HealingWind chapter 2 . 11/18/2009
Uh-oh, this doesn't seem too good for poor Krayon!
This plot is something else, truly, I don't recall seeing anything like this :D it's a good thing! Such a shame that there aren't more reviews than this, your fic would really deserve them! But I guess, after a few chapters the situation will change 8)
Please finish the next chapter _o/
| HealingWind chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
Loving your writing style :D! Oh, this is exciting Seems good so far. The mysterical mini-Krayon! Hopefully there will be more info about him in the next chapter.
| Garden Gnomie chapter 2 . 11/2/2009
this is actuly pretty good