Reviews for My Blue Heaven
Sayuri Lapis chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
Good fanfic
feedthegrimmjows chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
This was great! I love Michi and you did a great job with this!
lukas 10 chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
that was so romantic and beautiful :3
El Frijolero chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
Legit man
XYouXKnowXWhoXIXAmX chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
I love this story but... Now i have to jack-off
M-intheclouds chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Loved it!one of my favorites!u should write again...there are very few michis out there...:p
Pink-Aqua-Girl chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
haha loved it;)
Let's Get It Blazin chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
This is great.

I'm amazed how much your writing has changed (for the better!) since "Maybe, maybe not." A guilty pleasure of mine, that was, LOL!

Again, great. Michi is my second favorite Digimon couple, right behind the epic Daikari! D
michi chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
omg! the first ever michi lemon the other one ended with mimi killing tai and killing herself for cheating on matt i didnt count that one. Thank you so much for writing this!
MimixIshidax chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
Lee, I think I've said this more than once, partner in crime, but god damn it I do love your writing style! I mean shit, you're one hell of an author(ess?) Lol, thanks for the shout out btw, even though I didn't fix much (not much to fix b.g)

Okay on to the actual review, which even though I've already read it, deserves one. Like seriously.

So while I would've loved this as a Mimato (you know me) I have to admit this works really well as a Michi. It fits the Tai/Mimi dynamic, it's too cute. Like he always gives her what she wants pretty much, right? Which is how Tai is with her, (in our world anyway, lol)

This was hot and sexy and lemony WITH OUT being pornographic. As in, it wasn't distasteful. At all, which is important. More than that though, for a one shot (especially a lemon one-shot) it actually had a plot. It wasn't just Tai sees Mimi, Mimi see Tai, they have a two second conversation then have hot bathroom sex. It was Tai trying to convince Mimi he's a changed guy and he's willing to fight for her. He'll hold out this time because he's in love with her. And I quote: "Because he's in love with the girl beside him and she has no fucking clue" total fan girl squeal at that part.

But my fav line? "He’ll never let her know this because she’ll make fun of him if she finds out, but the second she uttered his name, he came apart in his shorts." BEST LINE EVER! I loved it.

Okay your "foray" into the M rated section of FF has been a success! In my opinion :]

I love you LeeBaby!

-Chris

P.S- Did I thank you for the shout out? If not, thank youu ;]
The Angel Of Sincerity chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
Lovely story, it's very impressive for your first lemon :)

I especially love how in-character they are!

The only thing i would do less is the swearing. Tai is the type who swears a lot, however when you're trying to make this a sensual reading experience and then you read a 'fuck' it kinda makes you cringe.
redskyy chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
I have to agree with PrincessJaded. You don't see an M-rated Michi very often, if at all, and this one was very well done. You could always just sense the connection between Taichi and Mimi, even with the mysterious problems they had previously.

I liked how well you captured Taichi's struggles to show Mimi how he really feels, all the while somehow enduring Mimi's seductions. :)

Very tasteful, with a nice amount of characterization to go with some of that lemon. I would love to see more from you, especially of the Michi variety. :D
PrincessJaded chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
Liya...

Girl, I LOVE YOU!

Isn't it funny that our lemons weren't written about our favorite pairings? I wrote a Mimato (which I love and all, but I'm the Michi girl, lol) and you wrote a Michi.

And it was hot, juicy, and... GREAT!

I love the tension and the way she's just like screw you but I really want you to screw me! And the fact that he wants her heart more than her body is adorable. It's sorta like waiting till marriage but deciding it's pointless because this is THE one!

I would definitely say write another M rated goodie! This was great! It wasn't raunchy, it was sexy and it had a story. It wasn't just in your face smut and or poorly written. You can tell there was effort to bring the character's conflict to the forefront of the fic, though the sexy citrus was a wonderful bonus.

There has been a severe lack of Michi goodness, let alone lemony action. And you just brightened my entire week/month, possibly even year! ;)

Love ya!

Diane

*fav'd*