Reviews for Romance Dusk
KuroGami chapter 15 . 3/19/2014
Guest chapter 15 . secs ago
Name:Reneus D .Marcel
Age:21 Year
Gender: Male
Specialty/Position:SwordMan
Race:Human
Devil Fruit/Weapon/Attacks:None Devil Fruit/His Weapon a Saber Made a Sea Stone And he Has Haoshoku,Bushoshoki,Kenbushoku Haki Physical Appearance: blonde hair, Red eye, Body Muscular and lean, 6,1ft
History:At age 6 he was trained by his parents to become a marine but he refused even though he did not tell his parents if he refused. at the age of 15 years he could absorb all that is taught by his parents he was considered a genius by others. she ran away at the age of 18 years and became a bounty hunter though just to get money
Personality:cheerful, enjoying , and smart
Likes:Training,Fight,his Friend,Sleep and candy
Dislikes:Arrogant,pervert,and avenger
Dream:The best swordman
Guest chapter 15 . 3/19/2014
Name:Reneus D .Marcel
Age:21 Year
Gender: Male
Specialty/Position:SwordMan
Race:Human
Devil Fruit/Weapon/Attacks:None Devil Fruit/His Weapon a Saber Made a Sea Stone And he Has Haoshoku,Bushoshoki,Kenbushoku Haki Physical Appearance: blonde hair, Red eye, Body Muscular and lean, 6,1ft
History:At age 6 he was trained by his parents to become a marine but he refused even though he did not tell his parents if he refused. at the age of 15 years he could absorb all that is taught by his parents he was considered a genius by others. she ran away at the age of 18 years and became a bounty hunter though just to get money
Personality:cheerful, enjoying , and smart
Likes:Training,Fight,his Friend,Sleep and candy
Dislikes:Arrogant,pervert,and avenger
Dream:The best swordman
Shadow40000 chapter 12 . 8/19/2012
Woah...!
Every member has a zoan fruit O_O

then.. then... those guys thrown overboard xDD they drowned :P lol?
won't it be a problem for the crew incase of a shipwreck xDD
they're all doomed... not a single one will survive.. but on land... yeah they're strong :/

great chappie man...!
Update soon plz :D
Shadow40000 chapter 11 . 8/18/2012
awesome man :D

lol at those wannabe pirates xD
great great chapter...!

hey dude.. if yer still reading the reviews...
plz plz update? :3
Shadow40000 chapter 9 . 8/11/2012
great great chapter :D
LOVED the fights xD

all was awesome... :D i mean... the descriptions were very good indeed _
and then the finishing move... very well use of the DF abilities.. and all...
excellent chapter :D

great job Sham-san...
Update please :3
Shadow40000 chapter 8 . 8/11/2012
wahahaaa... XD
that lil comic relief in the beginin was pretty good lol.. :P

and ahaa... we finally see poca in action? :3

and i didnt know that ensign was that strong O.o
hmm...? awesome...!

and lol... all that V-A notices is his broken desk xDD

great chapter man...

PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!
Shadow40000 chapter 7 . 8/9/2012
lol...
Van's crew doesn't have a name yet :P

and woah... its turning an all girl crew LOL
except for the captain himself...
makes him look like a play boy LOOOl...

great chapter :D
Shadow40000 chapter 6 . 8/9/2012
whahahaaaa...
great fights! :D
and woah.. :/ a vice-admiral's strength! :O
they all were defeated D:
what'll happen now _
oh well...
i'll just read the next chappie to find out :P

great chapter shambles-san!
Shadow40000 chapter 5 . 8/7/2012
great chapter shambles-san/chan

anyways...
that was a pretty detailed past on Haze :O
and so thats what her fruit is :D
and great creativity with the colors and all..
so all color's have a specific power i think... or the other way round...
yellow-speed, pink the sharpness, blue energy blast, green rigidness?strength?

anyways... nice story...!
Shadow40000 chapter 4 . 8/7/2012
WOAH...!
that was a nice long chapter :DD
Totally LOVED IT LOVED IT :DD

Crescent Dagger Chris Hopkins :O Woot! :D indeed another kool story..! _

and ahaha... incredible! Drew is like Van's Shanks :3
Great twist...!

and ahahaaa... the writing and plot and all has changed and improved from earlier chapters :D

but recruiting is pretty fast :P

and LOL at Drew's chivalrous nature xD

and another lol at ... 'This Is Not My Face!' xD

awesome chapter :)
Shadow40000 chapter 3 . 8/7/2012
haha...
a dragon head :P
yeah... good one ;D
great chapter man...
i really think u should continue updating this story :/
Shadow40000 chapter 2 . 8/7/2012
hehe...
I'd guessed she was a girl... cz the name states so xD
but then when i read it was a him, it thought otherwise...
lol nice twist xD
great chapter...
Shadow40000 chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
wow...
Nice :D
Niian chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
Name: (last)Son (first)Leanne

Age: 11

Gender: girl

Specialty/Position: idk... musician?

Race: Human

Devil Fruit/Weapon/Attacks: She only uses her fist.

Physical Appearance:

Height: 4.6

Skin: Tan

Hair Length: till knees

Eye color: Black right and left white

Hair color: White and black streaks

History: She was once tested in a lab by marines. They injected a poison that causes her left vision to see weaknesses, weak spots(that they could be paralyzed). She lied to the marines that she couldn't see it. so they abused her, howl her sleep, injected other poisons which gave her the sight to predict attacks, can sense enemy a thousands miles away, and and can defend her self with wind, earth, water, fire, any objects around her.

Personality: She sleeps randomly (worse then ace's), she is like a another luffy, she has bad sense of directions, tomboy, can be cold if they insulted her friends.

Likes: Friends, chocolate(steal her chocolate she just gets crazy!), candy, the smell of the sea, adventures, actions, bubbles, sky, winter, meat, training, sleeping.

Dislikes: NEEDLES, veggies, someone stealing her chocolate, friends hurt, marines, mornings.

Dream: To complete other friends dreams and to be the best musician in the world.

Other: she has bad sense of direction, sleeps randomly (even in fights, being scolded to, about to get punch, Etc...), she can be a real demon when someone tries to wake her up...
ChesirexKittyxCat chapter 4 . 11/21/2011
Aw Shoot. I Sumbitted Jamie In Twice... My Computer Didn't Tell Me That Until Now. I'm So Sorry For Spamming Your Email With That.. ;w;

I Love Your Story So Far, Good Job, And Thank You For Posting. ;u;
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