|Reviews for Endless war|
| The Silent Resident chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
Good grip on Quake violence which is good, need to improve grammer
| Corax2009 chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
I'm glad I read this. The idea of a teenager being taken into the ranks of the military out of desperation - that's full of possibilities.
The only thing I'm going to pick on is some of the spelling. Like, the sound of "meddle" instead of metal. These are things that make the reader snap back to reality and say "Whoa, I'm reading something." Which makes it hard to keep reading.
But this is an awesome story with a lot of potential. The opening was cool. Right away, there's a problem... being turned into Strogg Spam. I hope you pick this back up.