Reviews for The Weapon Revised!
Deadzio chapter 4 . 12/3
The story is pretty good, but the whole thing with him not using his own wand to cast spells to not get caught by the Ministry makes zero sense. The trace is used to detect magic cast in the immediate vicinity of the underage wizard and isn't placed on his wand specifically. That's also why Dobby's use of a levitation charm was noticed by the Ministry. Just by going to a place like Diagon Ally Harry wouldn't need to be so secretive anymore, since there are so many wizards around anyway, that no one could prove anything. That's why he just wasted a bunch of money and time.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/14
Yeah, right! Harry literally wouldn’t have survived the summer with that sleep pattern! He’d have to focus on his own physical and mental health – including getting 10 hours of good quality sleep every night – or he wouldn’t learn a damn thing… much less be in a position to actually use it, FFS! *facepalm*
Nothingburger chapter 9 . 8/2
It's a well written Harry. Because it catches just how much of an idiot he is.

Really not eating or keeping himself healthy to 'help' win the war. Harry was raised in the muggle world and should know better. So I guess it really does capture how much of an idiot he really is - just like canon.

He has magic, he could literally keep an array of fresh fruit and other healthy options at his side 24/7 and only have to hit a store up once - instead of 'wasting' time going several times for stale bread and instant coffee...

And Harry who ran around the department of mysteries who took crucios at the graveyard, that Harry believes he'll survive those better if he's too tired and weak to stand? The logic there is baffling. He could literally still practice magic while eating healthy at the same time, he could be running and exercising everyday and cast magic simultaneously to practice.

So his stupidity is funny in a way - if it wasn't so obviously inserted as Drama because otherwise the entire story so far would just be Harry learns some new magic and nothing else.
Hawklan chapter 47 . 7/24
just finishe this huge fic and wanted to say thank you for an enjoyable read.
Guest chapter 44 . 7/13
Wow, almost to end of story in hope that Harry, mm author will get a grip. The author seems as confused as is the Potter in his story. Such a waste of an excellent plot.
Izzy stargirl chapter 47 . 4/4
I cried
Guest chapter 47 . 3/21
This was an absolute delight to read. I'm sad Lupin never had the chance to come around. I'm a bit lost on what happened to Moody. Lol
I haven't read anything quite like this elsewhere, so I'm glad I stumbled on it

Thank you so much for sharing.
snamioneBDSMcuriosity chapter 47 . 9/26/2022
Wow. Just wow. This story is very different from most of what I have read. Loved every moment of it.
MasterOfDeath7 chapter 40 . 5/23/2022
It's good, I just wish Harry would remember that Dumbledore put him with the Durselys, the Dursleys treated him bad enough that he didn't consider the place his home which led to the wards falling and that Dudley was the one who called Harry in the first place. Literally none of the blame can be placed on Harry yet he is acting like Petunia's punching bag.
BlackStarMage chapter 47 . 4/27/2022
That was absolutely fantastic, a bit disappointed at the abrupt ending but the only loose end was Harry's magic, really. So, fantastic.
BlackStarMage chapter 37 . 4/27/2022
This is definitly one of my favorite fanfictions ever
Fuck Names chapter 39 . 2/8/2022
Ah this is has gotten ass all of a sudden
Fuck Names chapter 37 . 2/7/2022
Fuck Names chapter 33 . 2/7/2022
I fucking love this.
Fuck Names chapter 32 . 2/7/2022
I love this.
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