Reviews for Sugar Coated Lies
alone.together.us.you chapter 24 . 6/17
Um. I know it's been years, but are you going to continue this? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DO!
EmptySurface chapter 8 . 1/5
It's just really... not quite annoying, but maybe irking? Yeah, let's go with that. Irking, that you've placed Ed in a modern high school when this is supposed to play out in the early 20th century. So, yeah...
nekogirl017 chapter 24 . 7/4/2014
Your last update was two years ago. I wish you'd finish this! It's just the story I've been looking for to read!
nekogirl017 chapter 11 . 7/3/2014
My guess is that Havoc's back hurts because he's old as well as a war veteran.
LDK chapter 24 . 5/14/2014
Awesome fic! I love the suspense in it, and it really feels like things might start coming together soon! I like what you've done with Ed's character, he seems more mature and soldier-like, yet still undeniably Ed. I feel like he is a bit wimpy in this fic, but I guess him being strong and powerful is over-amplified when it comes to anything alchemical. Thanks for writing this story, I can't wait for more!
alchemyfreak42 chapter 24 . 4/9/2014
UPDATED!
Echodust20299 chapter 24 . 3/30/2014
I started reading your fanfic back in 2009. Lost it, and just recently found it again. I was very happy to find it again because it has been on my mind for years. I look forward to future chapters from you.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
it's spelled Fuhrer, not Furher. German doesn't use English grammar...
Latias876 chapter 24 . 10/13/2013
When's the next chapter gonna be out?
Optimusa chapter 24 . 9/26/2013
More times a gazillion
Fi Suki Saki chapter 24 . 9/10/2013
Please Update! Continue! Don't drop it!

-

I love fic like this! Ed in undercover mission as 'normal' school teenager with one of those three( Roy Riza Jean) as his parent! And how he act hard to act like 'normal' teenager surrounded by other teenager, was interesting to watch/read! ;)

-

I hope the mission end well...! I'm worried after all... #smiled weakly
MemoriesOfVoxei chapter 24 . 8/18/2013
I'm so IN LOVE with this fic! I really can't wait until next chapter! For something that started without a plot (or I guess so from what you seemed to be saying in your author's notes at the beginning) it's definitely AWESOME! Lots of things happens and there is mystery hanging in the air! I really like that! Also, it doesn't seem like the characters are oc to me, and Ed's maturity is... really something to look up to. I definitely liked when Darci noticed that Ed was not brought up by a soldier father, but was himself a true soldier. I wonder if she will ever find out the truth, what would her reaction be x3

Keep up the good work! I'm waiting impatiently for the next chapter,
Voxei
69AnimeFreak69 chapter 24 . 5/2/2013
oh Mustang Mustang ...
oh and I want a new chapter soon please !
69AnimeFreak69 chapter 15 . 5/2/2013
oh god ... where did Ed come up with those things ?
69AnimeFreak69 chapter 6 . 4/30/2013
I don't know why but this chapter made me think about something
what if - in some story - Ed and Winry's or Roy and Riza's or someone's kid calls friends to come over
I would feel really sorry for the friends
having to survive the FMA characters craziness
236 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »