Reviews for Kidnapped
k chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
I didn't find the apostrophes difficult to read at all, I've seen many fics with the same style for Jayne. And it may have been my imagination, but I had a pretty clear idea of the plot as I read.
Thescarredman chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
BigT is right about the jumbled narrative, but I think that was intentional, wasn't it? A reflection of the character's jumbled thoughts?
Serene River chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
...I actually would really, really like to see this continued. ...Really. I think it could be an interesting character/relationship study. but in any case, it was disturbing, but good.
BigT1587 chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
You have a sort of roundabout way of writing. It makes it difficult to read when you just don't get to the story. Sorry if that sounded jumbled. But anyway,it was a really good idea for a storyline.
Ann chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
The constant apostrophes made it very difficult to read. There are other ways to invoke vernacular speech.