Reviews for Alone
Artemis 85 chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
aw sex please?
oxBlueBlossomxo chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
i like it (:

add the lemon and it'll be complete!
falseyew374 chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
ok i reviewed now plz continue! it sounds pretty good so far
LFuCkToY chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
wow... im hooked! please write more! though can u make it so he doesnt hurt her much or he gets her to enjoy it too? or make a twist and get saskue or naruto to wake up? hee hee!
freeflyingwolf chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
wow, sounds very interesting, please continue ;3
Apple543 chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
omg! i wanna know more!
HrMajesty chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
i like it so far please update soon
lady timari chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
finnish the story
UPDATE chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
UPDATE
krisV chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
seems good so far
poisontreat chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Blackmail is mean and wrong...but in your case very effecticve. So i will cater to ego for a good lemon!
Andiroo chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
Sex please! This is interesting, and I must be sated. :3
FromHereOnOut chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
Next chapter please!
KILL THE UCHI chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
GaaXSaku...Yeah!

The only thing i suggest is that you make the sex good instead of being all hurt-y and painful like rape.
sysyphe chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
love it already 3

update soon!
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