|Reviews for Alone|
| Artemis 85 chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
aw sex please?
| oxBlueBlossomxo chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
i like it (:
add the lemon and it'll be complete!
| falseyew374 chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
ok i reviewed now plz continue! it sounds pretty good so far
| LFuCkToY chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
wow... im hooked! please write more! though can u make it so he doesnt hurt her much or he gets her to enjoy it too? or make a twist and get saskue or naruto to wake up? hee hee!
| freeflyingwolf chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
wow, sounds very interesting, please continue ;3
| Apple543 chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
omg! i wanna know more!
| HrMajesty chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
i like it so far please update soon
| lady timari chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
finnish the story
| UPDATE chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
| krisV chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
seems good so far
| poisontreat chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Blackmail is mean and wrong...but in your case very effecticve. So i will cater to ego for a good lemon!
| Andiroo chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
Sex please! This is interesting, and I must be sated. :3
| FromHereOnOut chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
Next chapter please!
| KILL THE UCHI chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
The only thing i suggest is that you make the sex good instead of being all hurt-y and painful like rape.
| sysyphe chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
love it already 3