|Reviews for Hide and Seek|
| Ladyaloysius chapter 10 . 6/21/2013
What a great ride!
| Ladyaloysius chapter 9 . 6/21/2013
Come ooonnnn! Love it!
| Ladyaloysius chapter 8 . 6/21/2013
Love this one too!
| Ladyaloysius chapter 4 . 6/21/2013
Love this too,
| JperW chapter 10 . 1/2/2013
Lovely story with an excellent ending! :)
| JperW chapter 7 . 1/2/2013
I like that Abby and McGee aren't spoilng the secret to Gibbs about the Burn message, but IMHO that doesn't mean Yassar wouldn't use it. On the contrary, looks to me like he'd easily and perfectly would be able to make the same connection and track down Ziva / Tony.
Otherwise I'm really liking this! :)
| JperW chapter 6 . 1/2/2013
I was expecting this. Seems to be a too obvious flaw in the burn phone plan for Ziva and Tony to have overlooked. Either it's your intention that it is Ziva's intention or otherwise I find it to be a flaw in an otherwise good story, sorry.
| alexindigo chapter 9 . 9/5/2012
I've read this story too many times to count and every single time this line gets me:
"While he'd spend four years telling himself not to touch her, not to fall for her, not to love her, Ziva had spent four years putting herself further and further out there for him."
This is SO, SO true of their dynamic on the show. The more she puts herself out there for him, the more he pulls away. Ugh! It seemingly never ends and has been going in since S3. I think she really did try to finally move on after his not so nice reception of her in S7 and she did for a while with Ray, but again, nothing. That conversation in S8 in the bar, she looked like she was ready to give up everything for him and then he tells her that being with EJ is easy, that he understands her. The pain in her eyes at that comment? Again in S9, no Ray, no EJ but then Tony has Wendy now. Just how many times is it going to take for him to realize that she going to turn around and walk away one day?
So, so good J! This is one of my favourites. Thanks for sharing! :)
| Ncis obsessor chapter 10 . 7/29/2012
This story was really good and that is saying something. Everyone was right in character even Abby and McGee which when it is a Tiva story people forget about. I was impressed except I think tony would have made the first mood to kiss her not ziva to kiss tony but otherwise it was fantastic! Thanks for the great story!
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/25/2012
this story was honestly amazing! Please keep writing more stories
| silverduo chapter 10 . 12/9/2011
This was amazing! Like, seriously amazing. :) I especially loved the intense Tony/Gibbs conversation and the Tony/Ziva argument when he came to find her. I'm just surprised Gibbs wouldn't have the team searching for Yasar, even though the CIA was on it. Anyways, good read. :)
| Xena101 chapter 8 . 10/7/2011
I love this story and this chapter. I think if Weatherly and Harmon ever did a scene where they were arguing over Ziva they would make it as good as you made this chapter. Love your stories.
| USAFChief chapter 9 . 9/10/2011
I just read this story for the second time and when I went to write a review I found that one is already there, so this second review comes on this chapter. I agree that the tone of the story does not lend itself to a wild, monkey sex description, so the way you wrote it is perfect.
I like all that comprises your stories; dialog, plot, details of the stress and anxiety, and I don't mind at all when you have Jenny rise from the dead to fill a gap that Leon couldn't, although that could have been pretty funny - almost cracky.
Anyway...good job. I'm going to be rooting around in your stuff for a while this weekend if I can keep my wife off my butt about neglected chores. Hope you have a great weekend.
| Lanaa Taurof chapter 10 . 1/17/2011
Gosh, I love this story. I love Gibbs being aggravated enough with Ziva that he forbids what he knows is going on with Tony, despite the fact that it's a losing argument. I love that he threatens her if she hurts Tony. I love that Tony is completely flabbergasted when he realizes Gibbs is actually giving his blessing to a relationship with Ziva. And the best part? I love how flippant and cocky Ziva is that she managed such a fete, but at the same time she's badgering Tony into a date. Perfect. This remains one of my favorite Tiva stories.
| Lanaa Taurof chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
...disappeared in a poof of sawdust and coffee...
So, I'm reading this story for the fifth or sixth time and was absolutely amazed I hadn't previously commented on the first chapter. That line, with the sawdust and the coffee, might be the most appropriate stretch of eight word Gibbs descriptors in the history of the world. I'm serious. It makes me laugh every time.