|Reviews for Hybrid|
| Nirvana48 chapter 3 . 9/27/2014
Truly interesting! I've never read a narutoxprototype fanfic this good before. I've read some good ones, but this elite good. It really stands out from the rest of the others that got me this interested. I'm really looking forward to the next chp.
| Marcus.D the Bastard chapter 2 . 8/26/2014
this is the first well done Naruto/prototype fanfic i have ever seen.i thank you good sir.
| Residenthobo chapter 3 . 3/22/2014
Omg I want more right friggin now! This is awesome!
| SwordShieldandBuckler chapter 1 . 1/23/2014
Why does everybody kill the Kyuubi and absorb him? Well more like a few people but anyway...You made him a demon...Demons don't die...They cannot be absorbed and integrated. It's impossible. Even if it existed in the physical plane it is a MOSTLY spiritual being with like thousands, no millions, maybe billions of years as experience. It would easily take control of any being that tried to absorb it. How? After it's physically and mentally absorbed the spiritual can leave or use the opening left by the being to take control. I mean when you link up with a beings mind that has vast spiritual powers you get taken over, seal or not. The fact that its chakra can go over to Naruto means that it has less control over the flow of energy. And its soul being spiritual would probably be seen as part of chakra just weaker as it is not mixed with its physical energy.
| Brenden chapter 3 . 4/26/2013
great work. I think I should note that not sleeping and eating could be passed of as part of the bloodline. so he could reveal that
| cally777 chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
Coming to this not knowing much about Naruto (yes such people exist!), and wondering what the fuss is about. But your fic gives me some idea. Intriguing discovering about the demons and how they absorb each other and humans. The descriptions are very vivid, and there's a definite anime/manga esque feel, tentacled horrors and all. Along with a certain cold rational approach (not sure that's quite what I mean) which some might argue is a feature of Japanese anime. Generally in the way that Naruto calmly accepts his transformation as something of benefit, even when its killed his childhood self (if I understand it correctly). An interesting, well-written starting chapter.
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/4/2013
Will he consume the sound four? If so who ? I think consuming at Least one hight help him with the arm problem :)
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| Guest chapter 3 . 1/3/2013
This is a F***ing master piece loved it I've read it four times ( I might have to much time on my hands ) I love the arm idea might I have a suggestion? ( though I have no right ) maybe give him a more demoniac I.e. horns sprouting from forehead, a mask like darker than black by the KiNgDrAgOn him self
| Shisarakage chapter 3 . 5/14/2012
Interesting combos. The added tentacle-limbs from his back actually made me think of Doc Oc. I'd like to see more, since it seems like this could be a very addicting story.
| Wolfone10 chapter 2 . 3/1/2012
The bladed disc weapon... From Dark Sector right?
| Wolfone10 chapter 3 . 2/28/2012
"None of the beings they had absorbed had any experience with how the slimy looking appendage moved or how to direct more than four limbs." Not QUITE true.. there is ONE... You know it had four limbs and NINE TAILS? That it used to create powers and used as other limbs.
| Wolfone10 chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
| big nick chapter 3 . 2/2/2012
This story is so imformative and creative, it really makes it easy to visuallise and is a really good read. Hope this continues sometime or atleast put up for adaption
| i likes toast chapter 3 . 1/15/2012
i really enjoyed this story, ur attention to detail is wat really got me when it came to this. Hopefully u will continue because its awsome so far and has huge potential
| TGI fanfiction chapter 3 . 8/25/2011
I love this story, its absolutly great, i have always loved the idea of the virus from prototype, and thought it should be shown to do sooooo much more than is seen in the game. PLEASE pick this story back up, i'd like to see where you go with it.