Reviews for Night Of Fate
kitten-dreamer chapter 9 . 8/13
Hi there, it's been almost 6 years since an update on this story so I assume it's abandoned... but, I wanted to let you know that you have a good idea here and a good plotline. You could probably benefit from an editor/beta to correct some small English language mistakes, but overall it reads well. In the end of ch 8, you asked your readers if Draco should tell Harry the truth about his father. I would say "yes" and have Harry keep it a secret, pull away more from James, and let that spark James to be curious and lead to the ultimate discovery over the following years. The creature mystery is also intriguing -which creature? Anyways, I'm sad this story is done, but if you ever pick it up again, I got it on an alert. If you perhaps moved it to AO3 or elsewhere, let me know! Thank you.
G.Potter93 chapter 9 . 8/1
How long is this break going to be LOL?
It's been 6 years?
amenoshimai1 chapter 9 . 1/8
You know it's been around 7 years sense you last updated?...
CrypticSilhouette chapter 9 . 11/9/2015
But it's not abandoned though
Julia Ba chapter 9 . 10/26/2014
It was a lovely story. I thought you'd make Harry remember something of his first life but may be you were planning it for later? Anyway it was a pleasant read, thank you!
solsere chapter 9 . 8/19/2014
Really interesting premise! Greatly enjoyed what you have up so far. If you ever decide to continue the story, I'm sure lots of people (myself included) would be ecstatic. I'm super curious what kind of creature inheritance Harry got; the connection between Harry's pervious life and his one; why Fate chose to do what it did...
KrystalMyashi chapter 2 . 8/10/2014
The story idea is interesting and all, but how the fuck could Voldemort have immediately known who was referred to in the Prophecy? And it's ridiculous that a Prophecy would be made of someone already a year old, he shouldn't even be born yet for it to make sense.
leylinjan chapter 9 . 5/25/2014
nononono - please :'(

wanna see harry's reaction to his parentage!
Lavonya chapter 9 . 4/30/2014
MORE?! pwease?!
Lavonya chapter 8 . 4/30/2014
Tell Harry!
Lavonya chapter 7 . 4/30/2014
I don't like Andy...
Lavonya chapter 6 . 4/29/2014
Here is my review: I this Harry is so! cute in this!
Lavonya chapter 5 . 4/29/2014
James is a /real/ bastard here!
Lavonya chapter 4 . 4/29/2014
Hmmm... interesting...
Lavonya chapter 3 . 4/29/2014
Why is Harry not the main part of the story?
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