Reviews for New Arrangements
Guest chapter 25 . 12/29/2016
Amaying! :)
Tandy Sandman chapter 25 . 12/6/2016
It's finely written but so sad… I loved this fic! Thank you so much for all your had work!
anesor chapter 15 . 9/28/2016
Wow, Qui-Gon seems to be in the runnign for bad decisions this time around.
anesor chapter 13 . 9/28/2016
Dooku, you idiot.
anesor chapter 10 . 9/28/2016
I'm gonna need the coffee after an all nighter. Maybe Qui-Gon's getting started early for senility. How many clues/hints from the Force will he need? (Poor Obi-Wan)
anesor chapter 9 . 9/28/2016
*smack* coffee! Solve the mystery, think like columbo!
anesor chapter 8 . 9/28/2016
Yup, as the phrasing suggested. Poor Obi-Wan and HTH could Qui-Gon protect him from the dark when he was left blind.
anesor chapter 7 . 9/28/2016
I'm glad you finally shifted POV, Qui-Gon never asked who or that the rejection was different direction...
anesor chapter 5 . 9/28/2016
Assumptions are very dangerous, Master Jinn. I'm becoming more and more certain of an earlier W.A.G...
anesor chapter 3 . 9/28/2016
Way past time to hit the rumor mill, it may have errors but it will help identify problem areas.
anesor chapter 2 . 9/28/2016
Wow, hey guys, a closed mouth gathers no feet.
equine 14 chapter 25 . 7/28/2016
So amazing!
equine 14 chapter 6 . 7/28/2016
Loving this story! So much obi-angst, balanced out by qui-gon's POV that cradles the story in a very good way. Nice work, keep it up! I know this was published and updated long ago, but I am reading it now, and so I will review now, got that people? May the force be with you... Always...
Maeve.Pendergast chapter 25 . 3/15/2016
The way you wrote I found it really hard to see how it could end with Obi-Wan's knighting. I absolutely loved the story by the way! It totally made me cry at the end. When it says "He hoped Obi-Wan had found the peace he'd wanted so badly" it really seals the deal for me about this being Obi-Wan's funeral because Obi-Wan wanted to die and find peace not live and become a Jedi Knight. Now it made sound like I'm a pessimist but in all actuality I really really wanted to Obi-Wan to live and I supposed he still could but I guess I'm too one-sided to see it. Excellent writing and such a unique story! Its cool to leave it open like that however I makes me itch to hear what you actually would have had the ending be given the choice. Definitely one of my favourite Jedi Apprentice (Qui-Gon/Obi-Wan era) stories.
CheddarTrek chapter 7 . 3/5/2016
The mystery is interesting and whatnot, even if I'd guessed from Dooku's first appearance that something along these lines had been going on...

...but it's killing my 'suspension of disbelief' to see how much Qui-Gon has been kept in the dark. I just can't get my head into that aspect of the story, and it keeps pulling me out of immersion.

Still interesting though!
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