Reviews for The Great Below
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 1 . 9/16/2014
that was sort of sad and weird
edwardxbellatogetherforever chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Wow.. This was sad. I hope Bella doesn't become a drug addict though. And hope Edward gets better. It seems he wants to, especially with Bella here.
Thanks for sharing. This was great. Are you maybe planning to write a bit more for this? That would be great. :)
yearprincess chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
I dig it.
Mrs. Jasper Lee Whitlock Hale chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
did bella try the drugs
Guest chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
AWESOME STORY!
x0x0.Tina.x0x0 chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
cool story so far...
EverlastingMuse chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
very good!
Eve-gone-bad chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
Wow, this story is amazing, the only thing that I don't like is that is a one shoot. I really hope you can make this a multi chapter fic. Please.
NenaaTH chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
love it! its really good! , i didnt really get one thing - In that moment I realized that we both had lost our virginity. Hers was physical and mine was soul crushingly spiritual.

was he a virgin too then ?
CinnamonKitty chapter 3 . 11/23/2009
Good story!
kmfroggi chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
wow. i am kinda speechless. this was really good thou!
summerof17 chapter 3 . 11/14/2009
amazing. please continue writing this beautiful story. please :)
Beans827 chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
Wow, great job! That was so raw and intense. I have not idea about the drug use but you certainly made it seem so real and i believed the feelings you were conveying. Really great job! Congrats on the win!
NicoleRea chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
Such a great chapter! So much happened!
TwilightJemS chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
This is vividly realistic, I've been there unfortunately...

Congrats on 3rd place!
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