Reviews for The Great Below
DICATAKADD chapter 3 . 9/18/2009

Much deserved!
deleted44444444444444 chapter 2 . 9/4/2009
That was good x
Veronique24 chapter 1 . 9/3/2009

Speechless... love your style of writting!
clairdeluneisgreat chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
wow, that was pretty f*cking intense. Loved it.
Reenie1998 chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
please please please please please please please please please please please write more i want to know what happens next i like this story i want more on here please write soon i want to see if edward and bella r together in the end
TwilightGurlFanatic1234 chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
i love this story keep writing its an amazing story please tell me their is more?
BwithUforever chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
loved it...very differnt than i have seen for the two of them...but it was wonderful!
cshorte chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
love it!
Allana Rose chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Oh whoa! Damn! *Is shocked* I like! AHH!
mangocider chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
totally loved this one more than the first i would really enjoy this as a story though
ktsgran chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Your use of words for coke and sex and Edward and Bella was magnificent. I had to read this a few times till I got the entire meaning. It really hit hard. I hope others recieve as much from this as I did. I worked with drug users/abusers for many years and could almost see some of my clients in Edward. What a fantastic job you did with this. great job! Thank you JPL
Twilightobsessed09 chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Very well written. As to be expected from you. This was amazing. I admired your use of Edward in this role and loved Bella's silent but observant character. Thier love scene was different, it was cool to see what it felt like to have sex while high, the outer body experience that is felt, this unnautural high infused with the natural one seems to make the experience even better. Not that I'm induced drug use but how you wrote it made it quite erotic. Tell me something was Bella attempting to change his mind there in the end. And if so it would for the best I think, for to stay on the current road that he's on, it would eventually end badly. Looking forward to more of your work
patch138 chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
are you planning to continue this...oen or two more chapters to bring some loose ends together?

LoveForReading chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
This was so good :)
thatgirljen chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
This was so good, I wish you could make it a real story. All from edwards pov, about his getting to that point and then after being with bella. I don't even know how old he is in this story. It was great though. I have a fascination with stories concerning drugs.
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