Reviews for Fists Of Steel, Heart Of Glass
Guest chapter 6 . 6/9/2017
This story was good up until this chapter
SoulMore chapter 7 . 8/19/2013
abc chapter 5 . 9/5/2011
now you're just writing shit that doesn't even have any logic.

static taking away a pipe would leave him open to attack?how and why and it would not.

and static decides to let this guy fuck him instead of taking him to the police or zapping him unconscious.

and you're summary says this story is a romance. it doesn't warn the readers about your child abuse and rapes and general stupidity.
abc chapter 3 . 9/5/2011
omg- could this be any more horrible. first- you seem to find it easy to write about kids being abused and raped- not a healthy fascination.

2nd- she was surrounded by cops and 2 heroes- and she just runs away and escapes- like that would happen.

static not only doesn't take francis to jail but also doesn't take his sister to jail- the cops know he was with francis transporting him- how does he explain francis not getting to jail.

and static sending gear alone after ebon and his gang- that's fuckin' dangerous- hard to believe static would put gear in such danger to chase after francis's sister.

and if she needed help why didn't she tell the police about the forced prostitution and rapes, etc...

so kinda ridiculous
abc chapter 2 . 9/5/2011
this story could be about anybody- just change the names_ point is they're very out of character. it doesn't sound like richie for sure. it doesn't sound like static. and definitely doesn't sound like francis.

and like francis would continue to wear a shirt covered in the cum stains of other guys- that's just bizarre and gross. static gave in too easily too. all he had to do was zap him or maybe land and tie him up. if you're just going for porn it's ok- but not as a static story
KitsuneDango chapter 7 . 2/5/2011
lol i love this!
Mcmllnchrstn91 chapter 7 . 8/5/2010
Sarena Kross chapter 7 . 8/5/2010
I really love this story its so sad but it has such a happy ending. I'm a big fan of your work keep it up! :) 3 3
callmeBaby'08 chapter 7 . 5/8/2010
WHAT? Did you just say Hotstreak's Dad is being eatin alive by wolves?...oh well next update please
callmeBaby'08 chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
i have no idea what the hell was wrong with me the first time i read this story , i passed it of without even going to the next chap which i wont normally do. But im glad i am rereading this its awesome
callmeBaby'08 chapter 2 . 5/8/2010
this is what ive been wanting to read right here
Dario Argento Syndrome chapter 7 . 3/30/2010
Hreat job on this chapter!
StarStorm199 chapter 2 . 3/17/2010
Richie is so evil in this chapter! I love it! Richie always seemed the brain-i-act type with a quiet thing to me but now i see the evil-ness! Love it!
StarStorm199 chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
AWesome job! Love the whole scene! I can imagine it in my head! Very awesome! I do love how Static is so innocent too. He is so cute when he is.
leyu02o.O wait leviathan02 too chapter 7 . 2/9/2010
wow I love the ending I agree it didn't need to end with smut it started with it XD ahh great beginning w I love this story! and so does my friend that I showed it to :D heck I love most all the stories you and twitterchan have written :3 I hope you will continue writting D: there isn't enough HotStreak and Virgil out there in the world yet! I plan on changing that soon :D you have inspired me to write again Yay okay end with my rant love your amazing mind w ~ 3
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