|Reviews for Seventh Inning Stretch|
| scorpio chapter 11 . 1/9
okay... uhh, great story! but it is too... no, very long since the last update. are you still alive? lol! jk. I hope this story is not abandoned, if it is, just tell us.
| pece87 chapter 6 . 12/24/2013
I hope sooner or later, Jacob just tells Bella no more visits and that he must not be good enough for her if she still goes back to Edward. That that must be the life she wants. Make her really miss him.
I would be extremely p*ssed at Bella if I was Edward. He hard gets sleep as it is and now hes up worrying over her lol.
Wow. I really didn't want to read the s*x scene between Bella and Edward. But part of me knew the deed wouldn't get finished but what a buzz kill for Edward lol.
| pece87 chapter 5 . 12/24/2013
I hate to say it, but Edward actually seems unbelievably charming. And what's with the rendezvous' at the museum? Is Emmett in the same line of work as Edward?
I love that Jacob works with his hands. So sexy.
I appreciate that he called Bella on her sh*t. She better make up her mind, because neither of these guys deserves this.
| pece87 chapter 4 . 12/24/2013
Ugh. Rosalie seriously annoyed me.
The freakin panties thing. Those granny panties in the first chapter were hilarious! Lmao
The scene with the peas was odd lol. But I liked how detail written it was.
Poor Jakey. Is the dude nuts calling her.
| pece87 chapter 3 . 12/24/2013
Wonder how Bella would react if Jake stopped giving her his sweet lovin. Lol
I really wish you would come back and finish this amazing story! :(
| pece87 chapter 2 . 12/24/2013
Awwwww I'm loving this Jake. So strong in his words and irrestible.
Bella hurry up and drop Edward. Although Edward seemed pretty handsome as Bella described him. And I don't ever want Edward lol.
| pece87 chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
That's what I was gonna say! The ring! Don't forget the ring lol
I bet Jake was sizing up Rosalie not checking her out, chill Bella.
How did Jake get her number? Lol
| MrsJacobBlack9999 chapter 10 . 10/25/2013
Please oh please come back to this story. I'm SO in love!
| seastorm13 chapter 11 . 9/18/2013
ALERT! If you are a Jacob fan DO NOT read this story! It's supposed to be a Jacob/Bella pairing, but in the end Edward's the lucky bastard! Throughout the story, Jacob is pictured as the sex-toy; he's the exciting stranger that helps her rediscover herself. Only for her to come back to Edward. Only to "appreciate" what she has with him and how good and complete her life with him would be. Of course Jacob is stupid enough to fall in love with her and Bella is...well, Bella. The nasty bitch does what she knows best. Same ol', SAME OL'
| TeamJakenTDL chapter 11 . 8/26/2013
I just cant stop reading
it is one of the best stories I have ever read
man u r awesome *bow 2 the almighty* lol
cant wait 4 more updates
see ya soon with more fun filled chapters
lots of luv and bear hugs
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/12/2013
could you at least let us know how this story ends, PLEASE! PLEASE! just a few words, one line PLEASE! you must have a heart! or is this the end? this cannot be the end, it breaks my heart, don't break Jacob please!... i swear i'm SUICIDAL! DO you wanna have me on your CONSCIENCE?save me please PLEASE
| katyaleighb chapter 11 . 7/24/2013
This is breaking my heart, oh my god!
| ninny 1 chapter 10 . 6/21/2013
Can you please find it in your heart to finish this intriguing story and put us your fans out of our misery
| ninny 1 chapter 11 . 6/21/2013
A really great read can't wait for what comes next
Congrats on your job
Thanks for your story
| myelirsmom chapter 11 . 6/15/2013
Please tell me you are going to finish this story...PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE...I'm begging you to finish it!