Loved the background into who Edward is - but I can't wait to get to the really juicy stuff. lol ;)

I'm really enjoying this but I see that you haven't updated for a while so do you think you could take pity on us and use the Easter vacation creatively? I know how Bella feels in the self-esteem stakes but although she has started to loosen up she has a long way to go. I was really hoping she was going to move in with Edward straight away and have to deal with his mess. His work schedule doesn't give then much time to get together. Jasper seems a really lovely guy in this. Why is the poor guy stuck with Alice? She really is a gremlin but I suppose the two work well together.

Love to you from the other side of the pond.

I hope that you continue with this story - I am so interested to see how Bella handles this... I read this on a Rec and am so glad that I did...

I love this story! I read straight through after seeing the rec on the blog. Please update soon!

I really love the story so far! It's a great premise, definitely unique (even if it somewhat, barely based on a story that may or may not be true). Thanks so much for writing. I saw this recommended on Little Known Ficster, and couldn't resist.

Okay I see you haven't updated in a long while...please tell me you haven't given up 25% of the way in.

I know what it's like to lose your job, it's amazing you were able to salvage the day. I loved this chappie!

a very interesting spin on arranged marriage. Can't wait to read more.

I'm not exactly sure how I found this story but I love it. I hope you continue it!

bella frustrates me... she's so difficult.

I thought Edward was supposed to be th emoody one?

Nah, I kid the emoness, I'm actually loving it. :)

I just found this story and I absolutely adore it. :) I love the plot and your take on the characters.

This story is hilarious..

hi there. after your week/month/lifetime of essay writing hell, I thought the best way to cheer you up (and inspire you to write, screw university and y'know... education).

a lot of ground was covered in this chapter. I like how edward and bella switch up from being mad to being affectionate like a long-time married couple. I sometimes feel that it is a little uneven- they're comfortable about some things, like cuddling and touching and incredibly uncomfortable other things, like actually talking, but I suppose that is the nature of their situation. Also I figure this is probably a lot based on how it actually went the people who inspired this story.

oh and i LOVED this line: "The night was suddenly too loud; he wanted everything else quiet and still, because if the world was quiet enough, perhaps he could listen for Bella's thoughts."

seriously loved it, especially because I think you could stick that line into Midnight Sun/anywhere in canon and the sentiment, the syntax, the style would all fit perfectly.

I'm scared for the real world to intrude esp when B&E are so shaky even in lala (honeymoon) land but I'm excited for more chapters. Oh the paradox of it all!

also, you said 'bugger' and 'sod' in your message. that made MY day. britspeak is awesome.

OMG! I can not wait until the next chapter! Plez update soon!

oh the gremlin is back! I cannot wait to see the next chapter. *squee* this is a great story.