Umm, Story looks good and it has not seem to have any star trek parts in it that kinda puts the story out of the cataglory but I am sure something will be added.

I liked the Cat like creature on chapter 2, it can change color due to it's mood, nice none tech approach, and descriptions and details of things are very good also.

It would be helpful to describe more of the characters more so I have an idea who they are like and what they do, but good story, I know not many people review so I done my part.