Reviews for In My Heart
CallMehTehOdd1 chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Wow. That was really powerful. Very emotive, and very in character. I *may* have shed a tear, or bucketload of them.

It was a very real process of dealing with death, and I think that given Henry's "condition" & experiance, you handled it very well. Bravo.

TehOdd1 xoox
Soului chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
Very nice, I really enjoyed that.

I loved your take on Henry, especially that part with Elisabeth the 1st.
supernatfem76 chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
You really did an excellent job depicting how one feels when someone you love is taken from you unexpectedly. I liked Henry's words of wisdom regarding death and how to cope with the death of loved ones. I also liked Henry's story about Elizabeth I. You always strike a good balance between Vicki's strong side and her vulnerable side in your stories. This story is another fine example of that. Excellent job on the dialogue as well. Your word choice for describing the night sky during Coreen's funeral was phenomenal and you also did an excellent job writing the entire funeral scene.