Reviews for Working it Out
MiyukiShinodaMindFreak chapter 2 . 10/6/2011
Interesting plot. However, it could be improved with more details of the surroundings & the appearance of the characters. And from this sentence "She inhaled trying to find a way to get rid of Ron and have some piece with her handsome husband ", the word "piece" should be "peace". Hehe, once awhile that error occurs for me too because I don't use beta. Good story. Mostly grammatical errors. The originality of the characters are good & that's it. Keep on writing.
singingofgallifrey chapter 2 . 6/3/2011
Emmzdy chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
Aww this is so sweet. i love it
Creative Pixie chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
DELETE ME PLEASE FAN FICTION chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
I think you should add to this story. This would be a very interesting beginning. Please update soon.