Reviews for The First Time
Gyotso chapter 1 . 2/21
This was by far the greatest lemon I've ever read. Perfect blend of humor, sexiness, and source material and you created a masterpiece! Truly a work to be proud of!
kimposslutble chapter 1 . 6/15/2016
cool
Guest chapter 1 . 3/19/2016
This is such a great fanfiction. Very interesting! Love it! Please write more like these! Two thumbs up!
Dani chapter 1 . 2/16/2016
No one ever writes about sucking on the balls/testicles I mean I think there should at least be one person who thinks about that . Any ways that was really good why does Kim always have to be the agresive one all the time?
DavidC20OfficialWriter chapter 1 . 12/7/2015
Well, this couple enjoyed one of the best nights of their lives, i hope they can see their own future!
Kim and Ron, looks like their future as a couple is getting very soon!
kim 1213 chapter 1 . 5/7/2015
Wildly hot. I bet they had “fun”!
marcusedwards411 chapter 1 . 3/21/2015
great
Guest chapter 1 . 2/20/2015
AWWWWWWW! *VOMITS* BLECH!
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 1 . 11/18/2014
thats passionate love10/10
Guest chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
lol
goodgirl 16 chapter 1 . 10/4/2014
Not bad
1rx4u chapter 1 . 8/27/2014
Ron's going to have a reserved seat on the next Deep Space Black Hole Probe!
bob craig chapter 1 . 8/3/2014
you sir have turned my childhood cartoon into a orgy of love i thank you for that
Kyle chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
Are you a female because some of what you said is very offensive? Men are no more perverts that wemen.
thecelticmermaid chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
Pp
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