|Reviews for What could possibly go wrong?|
| TooneyDeadlyFireDragon chapter 1 . 5/18
This was pretty funny so far, would like to read more...
Here is an idea, how about one chapter where they're trap on an island and been separated from eachother into groups of two and work together to find eachother...here are the pairings:
1. Train & Edward
2. Saya & Winry
3. Roy & Kyoko
4. May & Eve
5. Sven & Havoc
6. Creed & Lust
7. Riza & Rinslet
8. Roy & Jenos
9. Al & Leon
That's all I have for now, let me know what you think & I'll get back to you when I can, ok? :)
| Pokeshadow55 chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
One idea for continuing. Dinner Party. Or locking other people in the room, mixing stuff up and whatnot.
| FlyingTurtleduck chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
These were funny, but could you separate different scenes somehow? Like, with a *** or -.-.-.-.- or something. The whole thing would be a bit clearer.
| Elusive Panther chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
- envy and eve
- Sven and winry
- rinsilt (dunno how to spell her name) and greed
- Leon and winry's grandma (forgot her name, does she have one? Been so long since I have watch either series)
- al and...someone
- train and Ed (if you could)
- Roy and saya (if you could)
Sorry. I have a lot of ideas since I just wrote a fanfic chappy 2day. I love the part where Roy thought creed was a girl, I laughed like a madman inside my head, cuz I'm supposed to b asleep cuz I have 2 wake up in around 3 hours. Ugh. Sorry.
I loved your story, plz update! Hopefully these are enough ideas!
| georgster101 chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
Envy and eve fight
| com chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
Ookay! i have some freshing ideas...
put Alex and River in one room!
(Alchemist vs gerbell command) *sees who's sparkle last longer
Roy and Jenos...*making visions while Roy wants to be Fueher, Jenos wants to be the HEAD of Chronos and recruit as many miniskirt-wearing girls as possible
Lock Envy and Eve together...
That's all from me...
| Oddlypessimistic chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
love the creed line! That was priceless!
| AutumnLeafFall chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
My idea is to have Sven and Winry in a room, then another you could have is Al and Eve (sorry I cant think of anything they could do I just came up with the two on the top of my head after reading the fanfic but you could come up with some thing for them.) another on Train and Ed! XD it's halarious to think about what would happen if those two got locked in a room together. Write another chapter soon please and keep up the good work.
| muna chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
Make Ed fall into that world so Train can become friends and start shit! and the more drama, they go to a store and robb it, also blow up a buliding and then they go back to fullmetal world, and blow up the military becuase your cool like that!
| natcat5 chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
Haha! Priceless! The best part, by far was HAvoc trying to pick up a silver-haired girl..who was Creed! And then, 'I only go out with Train', yeah...that sounds like Creed...
Teehee, Ed and milk, lmao. I miss FMA, I finished the anime so long ago and I haven't been to the bookstore to buy the next volume of the manga...
| Dance Of Flame chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
Grr... Roy! You miniskirt pervert!
| akitasilver chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
lol, that was awesome!
although, i was half expecting Jenos and Roy to have a stupid little competition of whos glove is better.
| marsday chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
HOMG LING PLZ :u
if you've read the manga or watched brotherhood, he can eat at least as much as train ~ ~