|Reviews for A Punch to the Start!|
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/6
...Join club Nintendo
| Porky2 chapter 7 . 1/19/2010
Good story so far and even thought I am a fan of Disco kid I already saw him as someone who can get on people nevres. I was almost shock to when I saw Narcis Prince name to bad he not in this new circuit cause he make a great punchbag and good thing it was really Rick Bruiser and not Nick Bruiser cause one he scary and also he super strong. update soon
| Shadow-Gal31 chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
This is a really good fanfic! x3
Th einteraction between Joe and Mac is really good, and you are pretty darned good at writing about the seperate boxers while keeping to their personalities. Well done. xD
| Solitary Shadow chapter 5 . 9/12/2009
Ach, somebody remembers my presence! I've been terribly busy. I'm working on loads of things at the moment. My college (I'm in the UK, so what we call 'college' is more of a high school... I think) is highly demanding.
I was surprised to see you not updating for a while, and figured that you must be on hiatus. As long as you can get yourself back out of the maze that is writer's block, don't worry or tire yourself out. Chill for a bit. Writer's block is your mentality telling you that you should lie low for a bit - lots of sudden creativity bursts can bring that on. At least, that's what happens with me, although I don't get writer's block all that often...
| 6Phantom6 chapter 4 . 9/6/2009
Pretty well flow story here, though the translation boggled me...
The first one was: I need to heal aid naked bull. I still need some assistance to the Irish donkeys can.
Either I did something wrong, or...I don't know.
Still, great story so far.
| DelinquentDuo chapter 4 . 9/2/2009
Great story so far! I can't wait to read more of this.
| DelinquentDuo chapter 3 . 9/2/2009
Poor Glass Joe. You know, I bet he could beat Aran Ryan in a fair fight with no tricks. Don'cha think?
| DelinquentDuo chapter 2 . 9/2/2009
You know his name is SUPER Macho Man, right?
| Solitary Shadow chapter 2 . 8/28/2009
Hmm, Interesting. It's great to see more focus on the boxers themselves than just everything being Mac-centric. We need moar fics with the others as the main characters, damnit! xD Self is highly devoted to doing exactly that.
This story has good potential. The inner fangirl in me screams for longer chapters. I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for this one. Disco Kid, Macho Man and Joey boi seem to be quite in character, so I'm not going to rant stuff like 'OMG OOC NO'. Hope to see more from them. Especially Joey. Von Kaiser is also my favourite boxer - equally on par with Glass Joe - I'm going to look forward to that fight. And Title Defense with him. xD
Obligatory French Translations: 'How are you?' is better said as 'Comment ça va?' or 'Comment allez-vous?'. The first one is informal and the second is formal. What you use will depend on how polite Joe is.
'Call me Joe' is also said as 'appelle-moi Joe' or 'appellez-moi Joe'. The first is informal and the second is formal, much like what I wrote above. This comes from a Korean writer living in England who was taught French for five years. xD