|Reviews for Daruma|
| MindGeek chapter 3 . 1/5
What? Wait... WHAT? Uhhh, am I the only confused one here? I mean, I understood the first two chapters very well, if not a little delayed. But I'm not sure I got this one.
Malchior "woke" an "amnesiac" Rorek up to look after Raven... right? That's who "Logan Garfield" is right? The one who found Raven and had the puzzle?
But then who is the real Beast Boy? I'm guessing he is the one surrounded by... things in the graveyard?
This guy serving the Ancient One now controls Beast Boy's body I believe. I mean, I think I got that.
Are they all inside the book now (minus the fake Beast Boy and the rest of the Titans)? What's going on?
I mean, I like where this is going. That is, if I actually understand it and not just spitballing here. But could you confirm some of it for me in a PM or something please? I might just need to read it again. I don't know. But I do like the idea.
And as much as I want to say hurry up and update, I'd rather get a good quality story than an okay quantity story.
| Sienna Maiu chapter 3 . 5/21/2013
The “bus scene” is exactly what I’d been expecting.. and I love it. (what? did you not notice that not only were you called ‘Rae’, but he basically ‘self-corrected’?)
I was confused by the use of ‘Logan’ at first… but, then I realized that it was probably so that we could tell the difference from the ‘imposter’ later, right? Too bad the story ends here. . . a fractured BB in so many pieces.? I want moar.
Hah! :V You made Malchior a woman! XD
You should continue this, I am so very much amused.
(I’m not afraid to admit that out of all of your ‘random titles’, I am completely lost on this one. Oh, and I think that you typo’d a bit on that spider name…)
| RaVeN.RoTh16 chapter 3 . 12/2/2009
I am quite confused.
| RaVeN.RoTh16 chapter 2 . 11/19/2009
Yay! Great chapter! But I did have to go back and review the previous chapter before I read this one. XD Haha!
| RaVeN.RoTh16 chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
You cruel, heartless person! Stoping it right there? How could you!