Reviews for On the Moon
Sapphire1719 chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
Heart wrenchingly beautiful
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
it was beautiful ! you should think of doing a second one on them :] just to know waht ended up becoming of them :O lol but ah that brought me to a tear :'[ ! i loved it !
sweet.sonata chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
no there needs to be a sequel to this!
desi chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
oh this is wonderfully heartbreaking.
DarlingDearestDeadForever chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
But they were really happy together weren't they? So how come they like broke up? Or they just didnt want to try the long-distance relationship? Either way it feels very, very real and I'm really going to be haunted by this, it's too ingrained in my mind. I love it, good job!
lynn chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
Wow this was really beautiful and sad and very well written. It really touched me.
ppaws chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
I really liked this. It was sweet and very...realistic? it just felt very authentic, dialogue and setting and...dan-voice wise? and thanks for the song lyrics, its beautiful.
Josherz18 chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
I love it, it's great. Please, continue it, I'm a sucker for a happy ending..:)
awwwwwwwwww chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
i wish they found a way back to each other!
addisonkarev chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Awesome ! Awesome ! Awesome ! Awesome ! Awesome ! Awesome ! Awesome ! Awesome ! Awesome ! Awesome ! Awesome ! Awesome !

Seriously I'm such a Dair fan and the way you wrote them was just perfect :)