|Reviews for Walk a little straighter Daddy|
| Starlove chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
You made me cry uncontrollably, I'm serious, I was listening to the songs while I read the story and it all came out in tears. You are a great writer, I really liked this.
| Everlasting Life chapter 2 . 4/19/2011
OH my gosh... the end was so sad... I'll always have this image of Megatron in my head... like whenever I see him. Great job! it was wonderful! I loved it!
| Everlasting Life chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
Hey! I reviewed this chapter before but I was under my old profile! I think it was either... EverlastingLife (screwed Account) or SapphirePhoneix101 (invalid server)... Anyways... I just wanted to let you know that I was that super fan of it a long while ago... and I wanted to let you know I still love it! :D
i really do! :D
| Ariel-Mystic-Siren chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
Aww this was sadding
| Transformers123124 chapter 2 . 2/23/2010
this is so sad. i so feel like this is the way it should be. im crying its so sad
| Katnip Corodva chapter 2 . 2/18/2010
this is a great story. awesome job! hope u get the next chapter up soon.
| TFSTARFIRE chapter 2 . 2/17/2010
this made me cry, beautifully written.
| TheDecepticonFemme1 chapter 2 . 2/16/2010
Aw, that's so sad, I even started to cry :(
| TheDecepticonFemme1 chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
Oh this brought tears to my eyes..:(
That's very sad, but this is a great story nonetheless! :)
| Invalid Surver chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
That was so sad! i'm sobbing right now! lol jk :(
i loved it! lol Bee is so sweet!
well, anyways, that it was a great story :D
| Kawaii Zangetsu chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Omg, that was so sad! But a good job on the writing
| Sarah chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
Aww, so cute. This was well written and a great story. I've always enjoyed reading about Megatron's sparklings, that is if he had one.
| Clifjumpersfangirl chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
wow keep up the good work I can't wait to read more
| SmellyThePirate chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Aww what a cute story. Nice job, I really liked it :)