Chapter 16 Review:
I would love for a futuretake of what became of Bella.
I was really hoping that their time together would have ended with her being pregnant. Maybe? I guess it’s something that could have happened.

Will we ever get a look into his head?

I don’t know how you were able to get into the mindset to visit this topic. I just hope that you were okay in the end.
Thank you for taking on this monumental task.

hey, i don't know if you ever, ever check this account but please PM me. this is my favorite fic ever, so i'm revisiting it years later. i'd really love to talk to you about this fic because it's so interesting to read given the context of violence these days. your tone and sense of humor is just so on point too and it's refreshing to read now, mostly since people seem scared to write this way now. anyway, take care and i hope to hear from you!

Accidentally re-read this. Too grotesque for my tastes though you certainly have a way with words

Edward tried desperately for a suicide by cop. Didn't work though.

Of all the things that happened I feel bad that he died naked and that Bella had to stand there naked as he died too.

I know Edward deserved to die. But I was hoping for a HEA for them. I wanted them to make it to a tropical island where they could live isolated away from everything.

I wanted that miracle baby that would have changed his homicidal ways. But truthfully they would have likely had an animal killing psychopath baby.

WHAT?! NOOOOOOOOOO T-T

Absolutely crazy but brilliant!
A rare fic that makes you wonder and contemplate long after you're done reading...

Omg Loved it! Edward was a bad person, a psychopath, but his love for Bella, only Bella made me feel something deep and I got emotional at the end...idk if that makes me a disturbed person but oh well! This was awesome!
~Crystalena

Correction 'Jessica and Mike...both died...' should be 'Lauren and Mike...both died'.

Love the story

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I love the f-uped-ness of this story.

I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU WERE ABLE TO MAKE ME ROOT FOR A PSYCHO KILLER. BRAVO! ENCORE!

this story had me feeling so many emotions and god you did a wonderful job. This is nothing like I’d ever read before. It’s terrifying and amazing all at the same time. It’s one of the stories I’m going to be left thinking about for a while