|Reviews for The Emperors of Washington|
| lambcullen chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
I'm really liking the start of this...
| Capricorn75 chapter 2 . 8/29/2009
Wow, Bella is really detached and shit, what's that word that means not caring one way or another...Dmmn I need a dictionary. Anyway. Edward waiting outside creepy as hell. I wonder if he was aiming for Lauren specifically; if he has an agenda; and if he would care one way or the other if Bella was in the line of fire.
| 0027 chapter 2 . 8/29/2009
Well I'm still trying to figure out this story, but I'm def. imtrigued. I guess I'll just have to stay tuned..
| Sheeijan chapter 2 . 8/29/2009
Hey wait a second, you're calling us names when you're the one writing the story? Lol. Pot, kettle?
So Bella's quite the unusual kid herself. I was curious. I wonder if Edward has her house bugged? I interesting way to make his presence known. I can't help but worry that Charlie may become a target. I'm not sure what Edward's reasons are. People who upset Bella? Aren't good for her? Tick Edward off?
Thanks for the update!
| wizziewoo123 chapter 2 . 8/29/2009
whoa, definatley one of a kind and im intrigued!
| wisdomous chapter 2 . 8/29/2009
take THAT lauren mallory.
glad to see you're updating again, even if it isn't 'trumped'. i remember reading on your profile a while back that you reserved the right to stop writing and take down stories at any time. we all had fair warning. anyway, i'm really looking forward to where this story goes. with all the fluff out there (don't get me wrong, i live for the fluff) it's nice to have a change of pace and read something raw.
| Ironic Twist chapter 2 . 8/29/2009
Whiskey tango foxtrot - why am I enjoying this story so much?
I know the first chap only posted yesterday, but I need to go reread - I'm shakey on what's been established about relationship between E&B.
This story needs a thread over at Twilighted, IMO. I'd go set one up (if there isn't already) but haven't been able to log into the site all day.
| cdd12 chapter 2 . 8/29/2009
He's come back for revenge. Will he show Bella mercy for not teasing him along with her friends, or will she be punished for standing by idly, albeit oblivious to their actions... The smile and wave before the murder-I like.
| amata-jo chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
Not going to lie, I'm not sure how I feel about this one. I've never been a big fan of things like Natural Born Killers or True Romance. I think I'm going to stick with this though and see where you take it (mainly out of sheer curiousity because I am a huge fan of your writing). I just hope that if Edward is the killer, you don't try to make him good or get the reader to sympathise with him. If your giving us a killer, give us a killer. On second thought - do whatever you want with it. Be original and write what is in your dark mind. It will be an escape.
As far as Trumped goes, I'm sad to see it on hiatus but I completely understand. If it's not there, it's not there. All I can ask as a reader is that you do not delete it. It's one of my favorites and I'd like to be able to read it again at some point. Oh and if you do decide to delete it, at least tell us what that damn paper football note said!
Happy writing and sorry for the rambling review!
| Capricorn75 chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
Well, I have to say I've never read a chapter like THAT in Twilight fanfiction before. I'm curious to see if you can make Edward a character with any redeemable qualities. Or if just the fact that he's EDWARD CULLEN will naturally make your readers sympathetic to him.
| sweetp-1 chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Hi, I'm here because of my deep love of Wayfaring. I also happen to quite like a good darkward story, and once you said NBK, and Kubrick I was in. Look forward to reading more!
| Ironic Twist chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
This seems very different than anything I've read before. I'm looking foward to it! It's great to read something from you again.
Now to the stuff I'd prefer to say in PM, but have not the ability to do -
"And "Trumped"? Quite a sour topic with me. *cries*"
I read your profile and understand where you're coming from. I'm sorry that the muse is holding out on you. Perhaps one day she'll be willing to give up the goods for you. Trumped is a terrific story and I'll read it whenever it comes to you.
| Mrs. Quincy chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
POST MORE SOON
| alisa231 chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
I think you did a nice job creating a sense of 'place' in this first chapter. I *get* where Bella and Edward [in a lesser sense] come from.
Tyler's character stood out to me. He and the rest of Bella's friends were kept true to their canon selves but also given a bit more depth. It was entertaining to read about them.
And, if I didn't love your writing already, I'd totally fangirl you after the Stanley Kubrick comment. His films are FTW. )
| cdd12 chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Glad you're back. I love the dark, I'll follow you in.