|Reviews for These Inconvenient Fireworks|
| Ly-da-dinosaur chapter 1 . 2/5/2014
"...besides, It could of been worse."
"Kyoya could have been a man"
I couldn't contain myself anymore. That made my day XD
| Isa Knightwalker chapter 3 . 7/21/2013
Another fantastic fic! Even though it's been 2 years I hope maybe one day you will write more of these! Very well-written, the characters are just perfect. I loved the line about how she was with him instead of acting as a Cloud would. Perfect! 3
| Isa Knightwalker chapter 2 . 7/21/2013
LOVED it! Thank you so much for writing this. It was just perfect. I love Dinoxfem!Hibari 3
| Isa Knightwalker chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
I loved them! They still seem very in-character and I like the interactions with the rest of the family too.
| Paradoxismminant chapter 3 . 4/5/2011
Awww. that was cute in a weird way
| 18love chapter 3 . 2/21/2011
I enjoyed this series very much. Please keep writing! :D
| fierysuzaku chapter 3 . 2/20/2011
I like this...
I've just read the previous chapters and I kinda noticed...
The Land of Might Have Been...is it a possible parallel world where Hibari refused his proposal.
Just thinking about it...
Anyway, I like the part where the guardians in their own way showed a bit of protectiveness towards their Cloud guardian...
Ryohei gripping Dino's EXTREMELY HARD was funny...
As well as the part where Yamamoto hinted a threat...
Gokudera's part... it was interesting... it felt like something was really there... then again it must be my 1859 fangirlness taking over...
The pregnancy thing was quite beautiful and dark... it showed a bit of vulnerability on both sides that made it work...
Overall... good job! ,
| vapanalley chapter 3 . 2/17/2011
The little moments really count for a lot, don't they. That final realization at the end and all that bitterness in the beginning and the simple complicated relationship Dino and Hibari have are spazz attack inducing, and you just make it better. The mystical way that Dino views life and death, for just a moment, is really sad but grand in its own way.
| setsuko teshiba chapter 3 . 2/17/2011
AWW! kyouya's pregnant xD
please update soon!
| Flowing Distance chapter 3 . 2/17/2011
Beautiful as always. And of course nothing would stop Hibari, not even pregnancy XDDD
| Sae Arara chapter 3 . 2/17/2011
7 month pregnant and went to kill... I don't know if I should laugh or just stare in shocck, becaus ethat would be sooooooooo Hibari and a pregnant woman fighting is a hiolarious sight but on the other hand quite... IDK I will go for scary.
I love those unique comfessions of love. 3
| infinitymax chapter 2 . 12/31/2010
You have no idea how happy you made me by writing this~*~*
No one writes fem!Hibari and if they do, not as well as this. *w*
Thank you for making my first fanfiction of the year a memorable one. 3
| Paradoxismminant chapter 2 . 6/20/2010
Completely and utterly NSFW
What were you thinking?
Genius, beautiful, wonderful thoughts, obviously.
| Paradoxismminant chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
| hoshi-hime chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
Absolute, utter love. Not usually a fan of the cracky, gender-bended stuff you can see around (usually due to the atrocity of the writing) but this, I have to admit, was fabulous.
Your writing doesn't lack for much, and the short sharp chapter-like telling worked perfectly for this; not too weighed down with detail, but not to light on content.
I especially loved the section between Gokudera and Hibari; the description was utterly scrumptious.
Wonderful fic, and I look forward to reading anything by you in future!