|Reviews for Naruto's Kit|
| HyperCatnip chapter 6 . 2/20/2015
Characters are still bland and stoic. And emotionless.
Hinata not stuttering and blushing when in awkward situation. Naruto not being loud and insistent in his denial.
Everybody behaves like they are secretly Aburame Shino in disguise.
Characterization must be brighter.
I hope writing style will improve over time. It actually does, little by little.
| HyperCatnip chapter 5 . 2/19/2015
Okay, that's better but still somewhat bland.
She speaks like an excitable child she is, wags her tails, jumps around, sets things on fire and treats an entire world as her playground. She is very detailed, very easy to imagine, and childish. She feels real.
Akane so far is Rei Ayanami's copy, at least emotionally.
Not childlike at all.
Fight with Anko because of candy is a nice touch, but without details it doesn't have much of impact.
I keep reading, in hope it gets interesting.
| HyperCatnip chapter 4 . 2/19/2015
Akane is unremarkable so far.
I would prefer to read more detailed events with her.
So, ninja pin her down.
How exactly was Alane fighting back?
Who did she bite?
Did she growl or try to run away? What did she say? Did he call Naruto?
So far, this fanfic is bland. I much prefer SayuMayu. It's spicy and funny.
But I don't lose hope so easily. I will keep reading.
| HyperCatnip chapter 3 . 2/19/2015
This is better, but still not SayuMayu-grade hilarious.
| HyperCatnip chapter 2 . 2/19/2015
So far, Sayuri is cuter.
Also, character are far too calm for my tastes.
Why don't they freak out at all? Is there anything that can faze them?
| HyperCatnip chapter 1 . 2/19/2015
So, loli Kyuubii are all the rage now?
First Sayuri from SayuMayu, then this...
I hope your Kyuubii is at least half as cute and funny as Sayuri...
I hope this will be fun.
| jeanette9a chapter 3 . 2/11/2015
she does realise that if naruto is her adopted son of a sort that also means that akane is her adopted grandchild. so baa-chan your now officially a grandma.
| NARUMOKA chapter 1 . 2/5/2015
COMPLETE THIS FANFIC
| Exiled Shinobi chapter 41 . 1/18/2015
Great story about to ready the next part
| slythian chapter 41 . 12/30/2014
Great story will be reading next one too
| Morgrim342 chapter 4 . 11/8/2014
I agree with ur disclaimer, they do need last names!
| Born-From-Black-Lightning chapter 41 . 10/31/2014
Damn good story I really like it. A great read and defenently a favorite for me.
| Zeta173 chapter 31 . 10/20/2014
Mandara is a villain and comic relief
| Zeta173 chapter 19 . 10/20/2014
Butter. Sprinkle. Classic
| dmt chapter 41 . 9/27/2014
epic really enjoyed reading this hope to be more soon