Reviews for Naruto's Kit
Mechagodzilla128 chapter 7 . 9/7/2009
Great story so far, and I am glad that you are taking it at a nice pace. Too many people make some factor happen way too fast...

As for suggestions, I'd like to say my opinion on them.

I feel Akane should not have a crush until much later if at all. I don't know about other people, but I personally think it's better when people are innocent and not thinking about such things at an age like that. It would also make the writing much less dificult. As for a rival, I doubt any person in the ninja school could rival the nine tailed fox.

As for Hinata, I'm neurtal. I would rather there not be unessesary conflict, but I'm willing to see what you would do with that. It would leave the child confused though...

For the last suggestion, I think that she should meet someone characteristically evil and corrupt. I think that that way, she would be able to really develop a sense of right and wrong, and understand the boundaries of good and evil. I hope this helps.
Rose Tiger chapter 7 . 9/7/2009
Please keep going!
Deathmvp chapter 6 . 9/7/2009
I loved the mental image of Gia scaring the demon into running if he would have when on about youth when it attack the village. Also the notion that a little kid would now all of these tricks in the back of her mind is great and makes since since she has all of his memory from her own view.
Raven Marcus chapter 6 . 9/7/2009
heheheh! Very nice! hahahaha!
Godschildtweety chapter 6 . 9/7/2009
i love it
Godschildtweety chapter 5 . 9/7/2009
i love it
kamiaka yukiko chapter 6 . 9/6/2009
OMG! That was hilarious... loved the story so far!
Dragon Man 180 chapter 6 . 9/6/2009
Love to see Akane embarrassing Naruto without meaning to. But seeing her shred Kakashi's face was great! Being scared of Gai is understandable, but I'd say let him save her from some drunks or something so she finds him nice in small doses. And Hinata should introduce her to Kurenai, I bet Akane would find Kurenai very pretty.
Alex345 chapter 6 . 9/6/2009
Great Chapter!
JayceeRising chapter 6 . 9/6/2009
XD Akane is so cute and so damn funny!

And how the hell did she find out about Naruto Oiroke no Jutsu?

Anways, keep it up!
Rose Tiger chapter 6 . 9/6/2009
Aye yi yi...Please keep going...
Silver Warrior chapter 6 . 9/6/2009
*snickers* oh good god, Gai frightening the Kyuubi away from Konoha? Yep, can totally see that happening.
PaulRap Raptor chapter 5 . 9/5/2009
Keep up the good work.
PaulRap Raptor chapter 4 . 9/5/2009
Keep up the good work.
PaulRap Raptor chapter 3 . 9/5/2009
Keep up the good work.
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